What do you think would have made the essay more effective and why? Your answer should be 3 to 4 sentences.

here's the essay:

Take Another Look at Electric Cars

The average automobile driver pays $2,000 annually for gasoline. That $2,000 of gas is contributing to both the United States’ dependency on foreign countries and environmental pollution. Electric cars are beneficial for their owners and for the environment. Anybody who is buying a new car should consider purchasing an electric car.
Electric vehicles have a reputation as being expensive, but that has changed in the past few years. Purchase prices have been dropping and a federal tax credit lowers their actual cost even more. The average cost of a brand new gas automobile is approximately $31,500. Most new electric cars are priced between $30,000 and $40,000. That is a higher initial cost, but when you factor in the $7,500 federal tax credit (and possibly additional state tax credits, depending on where you live), the price becomes comparable to that of a gasoline car. The annual costs associated with owning a car are much lower with an electric car. The average driver pays about $2,000 a year for gas. The average cost of electricity for a year of driving is $500. That will save $1,500 a year in fuel. Additionally, a more modern and streamlined engine will save drivers in other maintenance fees. One government study estimated that electric-car drivers will save over 40 percent in annual maintenance fees.
One of the biggest arguments against electric cars has been their limited range. Electric cars do have a shorter range, but that range is plenty for most drivers. The majority of American drivers travel less than 35 miles a day, and the average electric car has a range of about 100 miles on a full charge. Charging the car at home each night will provide enough power for daily driving and allow drivers to save time by avoiding stops at the gas station. And, as the number of electric cars on the road increases, more businesses and employers will install charging stations for their customers and employees, which will make charging a vehicle even easier.
An electric car may not be for everyone, but they have evolved beyond their original restrictions. With a purchase price that is comparable to a gas car, and reduced fuel and maintenance fees, anyone who is purchasing a new car should seriously consider an electric car. Spread the word, and check out an electric car today.

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Answer 1

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What I think that would have made the essay more effective is the use of more emotion and flow. This is because the essay does not explain more in depth of why this problem needs to be fixed. It is also because, the essay does not have transition words.

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Write an objective summary of "Freedom of Press?" A summary is a concise, complete, and accurate overview of a text. It should not include a statement of your opinion or analysis. Use evidence to support your answer. **its the story from my perspective**

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Answer:

Freedom of the press or freedom of the media is the fundamental principle that communication and expression through various media, including printed and electronic media, especially published materials, should be considered a right to be exercised freely.

Explanation:

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Answer:

After "late".

Unless the caterer is late, this banquet should go off without a hitch.

Explanation:

If you read this sentence out loud, you would give a slight pause after "late", indicating a comma.

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the comma should go after late!!

In the poem, the speaker feels a sense of connection to his ancestors who immigrated to America and to the Native Americans who lived on the land before them. What might cause the speaker to feel connected to both groups of people? How can both parts of the history the speaker describes be part of their identity?

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Answer:

the speaker feels a sense of connection to his ancestors who immigrated to America and to the Native Americas who lived on the land before them

Please hurry BRAINLIST is your correct and answer them all...!!! Select Primary or Secondary for each source.

an article about criminals prosecuted by Sonia.Primary or Secondary?

a guest appearance by Sonia Sotomayor on a news broadcast.Primary or Secondary?

an opinion about a ruling authored by Sonia Sotomayor.Primary or Secondary?

a newspaper article about cases won and lost by Sonia.Primary or Secondary?

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1. primary
2. primary
3. Primary
4. Secondary
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According to the graphic organizer, which source is not credible?

www.usa.gov
www.harvard.edu
www.wikipedia.com
www.nasa.gov

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According to the graphic organizer, the source that is not credible is www.wikipedia.com.

What is credibility?

Credibility can be regarded as the objective and subjective components that can be followed to accept source or message.

In this diagram we can see that www.wikipedia.com is a general website unlike the other, with the least credibility.

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Complete questions 3-6 on page 376. Use text evidence in your responses.

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How does Rod Sterling establish the genre of Science Fiction beyond a play?

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He uses his emotions and powerful words to give audience a more in-depth version of his true feelings ((:
he uses a lot of emotion

Which sentence contains an example of alliteration?(1 point)

Emery walked down the street as if the pavement were hot lava.

Felix, frantic over the new schedule, forgot his homework.

Jared spoke in a loud voice that echoed through the woods.

The wind howled through the trees during the storm.

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Answer:

Felix, frantic over the new schedule, forgot his homework.

Explanation:

Most of the first letters of words in the sentence start with F :)

the 2nd one is an example of alliteration

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If I were to write a story what should it be about?

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Answer:

a dream that you had and you remeaber it that what it should be about good luck

Explanation:

Answer:

if you were to have any superpower in the world what would it be?

Explanation:

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1. Read the lines from "Do Not Go Gentle into That Good Night."

Grave men, near death, who see with blinding sight
Blind eyes could blaze like meteors and be gay,
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

Which phrase from the poem "Do Not Go Gentle into That Good Night" contains a pun?


A. "Rage, rage"


B. "Grave men, near death"


C. "dying of the light"


D. "blaze like meteors"


2. Read the stanza from "The Battle of Blenheim:"

Old Kaspar took it from the boy,
Who stood expectant by;
And then the old man shook his head,
And with a natural sigh,
"'Tis some poor fellow's skull," said he,
"Who fell in the great victory.

What is the rhyme scheme in this stanza?


A. ABCBDD


B. AABCDD


C. ABBCDD


D. ABCDBB

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Answer:

B &A

Explanation:

THIS IS CORRECT

The answer is C. Your welcome

Please help with this question.

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Answer:

C, You already have the Right answer chosen.

Answer:

Its C

Explanation:

in the text it is talking about how they behave.

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Use the text of the opinion piece, "What's for Lunch," and your completed graphic organizer to answer the question below. Include evidence from the article to support your answer. Do you think this author has an agenda? If so, what is it? If not, what is the purpose of her article? Does she achieve her purpose?


What’s for Lunch?

Marcia Amidon Lusted


Zachary Maxwell was tired of trying to explain to his parents why he wanted to bring lunch to school instead of eating hot lunch. They couldn’t understand why he didn’t want to eat the gourmet food described on the school’s online menu, which sounded both nutritious and interesting. Zachary just couldn’t convince them that the food wasn’t as great as it sounded. So in the fall of 2011, he began sneaking a small video camera into the cafeteria at his school, to show his parents what the lunches were really like. Six months and 75 school lunches later, Zachary made a documentary film about his lunch called Yuck: A 4th Grader’s Short Documentary About School Lunch.

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Which one is not a benefit to

employee which results through

positive attitude of an employee

Select one:

a. Job security

b. Promotion

c. Less stress

d. Enjoying life

= PromotionWhich one is not a benefit to

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positive attitude of an employee

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a. Job security

b. Promotion

c. Less stress

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= PromotionWhich one is not a benefit to

employee which results through

positive attitude of an employee

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a. Job security

b. Promotion

c. Less stress

d. Enjoying life

= PromotionWhich one is not a benefit to

employee which results through

positive attitude of an employee

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a. Job security

b. Promotion

c. Less stress

d. Enjoying life

= PromotionWhich one is not a benefit to

employee which results through

positive attitude of an employee

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a. Job security

b. Promotion

c. Less stress

d. Enjoying life

= PromotionWhich one is not a benefit to

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positive attitude of an employee

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a. Job security

b. Promotion

c. Less stress

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= PromotionWhich one is not a benefit to

employee which results through

positive attitude of an employee

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a. Job security

b. Promotion

c. Less stress

d. Enjoying life

= PromotionWhich one is not a benefit to

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positive attitude of an employee

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b. Promotion

c. Less stress

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= PromotionWhich one is not a benefit to

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b. Promotion

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When is valentines day?

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Answer:

February 14

Explanation:

The answer is February 14! :)

The police officer asked April and (I, me) if we saw the accident.
I or me???

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Answer:

I

Explanation:

the police officer asked April and me doesn't make sense it sounds better if you say the police officer asked April and I.

the answers is I good luck

Read the excerpt from the Declaration of Independence.

We hold these truths to be self-evident, that all men are created equal, that they are endowed by their Creator with certain unalienable Rights, that among these are Life, Liberty, and the pursuit of Happiness. That to secure these rights, Governments are instituted among Men, deriving their just powers from the consent of the governed, That whenever any Form of Government becomes destructive of these ends, it is the Right of the People to alter or to abolish it, and to institute new Government . . .

Which statement best describes the relationship between Jefferson’s diction and his purpose?

>Jefferson uses words with neutral connotations to present a claim based on reason and precedent.

>Jefferson uses words with positive connotations to praise his listeners for their political activism.

>Jefferson uses words with neutral connotations to suggest that there is no urgency to his message.

>Jefferson uses words with positive connotations to encourage peaceful relations with Britain.

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Answer:

I Believe the answer would "Jefferson uses words with neutral connotations to present a claim based on reason and precedent."

Explanation: Jefferson dose not try to encourage any peaceful relations after the revolution, Jefferson doesn't try and give no urgency, and he is not praising the listeners either.


Which of these passages includes an example of an analogy?

1. The sun set amid the paper-thin clouds that slowly changed colors from bright pinks and greens to purple. Finally, everything faded to gray as the sun vanished behind the hills.
2. The walls were covered in blue paint that was the same color as the sky on a cloudless day.
3. I chose way too challenging a slope for a beginning skier. I was like Wile E. Coyote running off the edge of a cliff, hovering in thin air, and then plummeting to the ground.
4. The piano wheezed like an old horse. Enjoying the noise, the two children banged on the keys even harder and drowned out their parents' cries for them to stop.

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I feel like a couple of answers coukd be considered an analogy, but would answer 3.

Answer:

I chose way too challenging a slope for a beginning skier. I was like Wile E. Coyote running off the edge of a cliff, hovering in thin air, and then plummeting to the ground.                                                                              

Explanation: An analogy compares several different points between two, unlike things.

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In the story "The Godlike Achilles" from "What Happened Before the Iliad," why does Thetis dip Achilles into the river Styx?

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Answer:

To prevent his death, his mother Thetis took Achilles to the River Styx, which was supposed to offer powers of invulnerability, and dipped his body into the water; however, as Thetis held Achilles by the heel, his heel was not washed over by the water of the magical river.

Explanation:

Answer:

She hopes it will make him immortal.

Explanation:

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Once, when Hughes was in seventh grade, he got in trouble. In 1914, when his seventh-grade teacher moved him and the other African-American students into a separate row in class, he got angry. So he put cards that read “JIM CROW ROW” on the black kids’ desks

Why do you think Hughes put cards on the black kids’ desks that said “Jim Crow Row?

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Jim Crow row is a folk theatre character created as a racist depiction of African-Americans & their culture so it was placed on their desks as a an insult to the black kids.

after we bought food and supplies, Kim and I brought the puppy home.
Choose the best answer choice below

Make no change
No comma is needed
Add a period after SUPPLIES to create two independent clauses
Add a comma after Bought to separate extra information that describes the food.

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Answer:

add .

Explanation:

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In this unit, you analyzed literary texts to create a literary analysis essay and a multimedia presentation. Analyzing a literary text can help you develop a deeper understanding of the text. You can learn more about the characters, the plot, the theme, and the author.

Think of a story that you enjoyed reading but wanted to learn more about. Explain why you would like to learn more about this particular story. What information would you research? How would you conduct your research?

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Think of a histroy related story that you have read before, then explain a reason for you wanting to learn more about the event. Then say I would conduct my research by starting with searching details about the event, writing them down, then organizing them into a presentation. With the data you have you should then analyze the data you chose as a backup incase the teacher asks you where you got it from. Then you can relay the information back to the teacher.

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Think of a story that you enjoyed reading but wanted to learn more about. Explain why you would like to learn more about this particular story.  

I would like to learn more about the story The Queen Bee by Carl Edward. I would like to read and learn more about this story because I thought it was very interesting and intriguing. It had a lot of twists and turns to it which I liked. Some of the story was funny and some of it was serious but overall I really like the book and I would like to read more of Carl Edwards books. My favorite part in the story was when the twist came and the nurse said the same thing had happened when she was just a little grub to. I understood when the queen tried to kill the princesses. I think she tried to kill the princesses because she didn't want them to have to fight with each other and have to kill one another to see which one is the ¨strongest¨ and that one would have to become Queen she wanted she killed it princesses and pick a different grub to become Queen.

What information would you research? How would you conduct your research?

Well I would research more of Carl Edwards books so that I can read them and learn more about why he started to write books and other interesting facts about the writer and his books. I would conduct my research by looking up and learning about the writer's past. If I were to write an essay I would start off by collecting and Gathering all my information about the writer and his books next I would write a rough draft about the writer it would be a five paragraph essay with lots of informative information about the writer and why he started writing books what his first book was called and lots of other interesting facts. your welcome :)

NEED THIS ASAP Best answer gets marked brainliest. Read the Civil Liberties Act of 1988 and summarize its content in a paragraph of three to four sentences.

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Answer:

The Civil Liberties Act of 1988 (Pub.L. 100–383, title I, August 10, 1988, 102 Stat. 904, 50a U.S.C. § 1989b et seq.) is a United States federal law that granted reparations to Japanese Americans who had been interned by the United States government during World War II. The act was sponsored by California's Democratic Congressman Norman Mineta, an internee as a child, and Wyoming's Republican Senator Alan K. Simpson, who had met Mineta while visiting an internment camp. The third co-sponsor was California Senator Pete Wilson. The bill was supported by the majority of Democrats in Congress, while the majority of Republicans voted against it. The act was signed into law by President Ronald Reagan.

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The Civil Liberties Act of 1988 was signed by President Ronald Reagan in an effort to repay a terrible wrong that had been done to Japanese Americans and Japanese visitors to this country during World War II, when thousands were placed in internment camps, simply because of their heritage. The act awarded these people or their descendants $20,000 each to make up for what they had suffered. Each one also received an official apology from the President of the United States. The act specifically stated that the government had forced these internments based on  "race prejudice, war hysteria, and a failure of political leadership."  

(direct quote from the Civil Liberties Act of 1988, which can be found on U.S. government websites)

How do 3 different people view Les Goodman? What do their actions and statements reveal about Les Goodman and also about themselves? ( from the monsters are due from maple street.)
can someone please also answer this question too?

Why does the author title the story "The Monsters are Due on Maple Street"? What is the significance (importance) of the word due?
thanks!

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Answer:

1st part

Some people view him as strange, and some people view him as a normal person who just has insomnia.

2nd part

the author's idea that unless careful thought and reason are used it will lead to the destruction of civilized behavior

How does the change in settings from the nursery plot to the greenhouse advance the plot?

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By allowing Saeng to discover the plants she is searching for. Seang wishes to abandon her search and leave the nursery but she goes to the greenhouse anyway.
It is essential in teaching Saeng about her past. How does the change in settings from the nursery to the greenhouse advance the plot? ... They look first in the nursery and then in the greenhouse before they find that the plant is a hibiscus. Saeng brings a leaf to a flower shop and asks the florist to identify its plant.

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Answer:

c

Explanation:

a chronology is the order of events based on when they happened

C: The arrangement of events in dates or order

The bears had been a nuisance, but Jodi secretly admired them. They were clever. They never gave up.

What is the main function of this text in the narrative?
It creates additional tension.
It creates the story's climax.
It hints at the resolution of the story.
It provides additional exposition.

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Answer:

Explanation:

The 2nd one

Answer:

it is B

Explanation:

2.
Which source would provide the best answer to this question: what is it like for someone who is captured and held for ransom by pirates?
an article about recent pirate kidnappings around the globe
an Internet search using the phrase “pirate ransoms”
an instruction manual for pirates
a book written by someone who was held for ransom by pirates

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Answer:

A book written by someone who was held for ransom by pirates.

Explanation:

Because he would have the most experience of his kidnapping.

Answer:

A book written by someone who was held for ransom by pirates

Explanation:

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2. Sonar
3. Radar
5. Scuba

Answer:

Sonar- 2

Rador-3

Scuba-5

Explanation:

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Answer:

option 2

Explanation:

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Answer:

put the comma after country's

Explanation:

Although the Mexican was economy is growing steadily nearly half of the country’s, more than one hundred million people live in poverty.

The Wright Tricycle factory uses one seat, two handle grips, and three tires for every tricycle that it makes. Select a numeric ratio for the following phrase: the number of tires to the number of tricycles.

A1:3
B3:1
C2:1
D3:2

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B the answer 3:1
I think so
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