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Summarize the passage below in at least two or three sentences. Then evaluate the passage, focusing
on the quality of the details included. Which portions of the passage do not provide enough detail to
help the reader understand the topic? Why? After you have evaluated the passage, revise it to
improve the quality of its details. In your revision, show which parts of the original paragraph you are
using by underlining them. Note: You may need to make up information to add to the paragraph. (15
points)
"Consumer Risk: Buddy Blocks"
A new product on the market, Buddy Blocks, poses serious risks to children. The blocks can break
easily and hurt children. Some children have even had to be hospitalized. The paint used on the blocks
is also unsafe. It has caused illness in several young children. There is one age group of children who
should especially avoid playing with these blocks. The national consumer product panel is considering
removing this toy from the market because of the problems it has caused.

Answer:

Summary: Buddy Blocks is a new product that has caused controversy on the market. It has been considered as a dangerous item to kids due to its fragile material and toxic paint. It may be removed from stores after all the damage it has caused.

Explanation:

There are parts of the passage that do not help the reader understand the topic, such as: "Some children have even had to be hospitalized" since it doesn't explain the reasons why they are hospitalized, and "There is one age group of children who  should especially avoid playing with these blocks", since it doesn't say what age are they talking about".

Revised and modified text:

"Consumer Risk: Buddy Blocks"

A new product on the market, Buddy Blocks, posseses serious risks to children. They can do serious damage due to their fragility and the toxicity of their paint, specially on little kids that can be easily hurt because of their vulnerability. The national consumer product panel is considering  removing this toy from the market after all of these consequences.

Write a simile about athlete.

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A week after the murders, police raided Spahn Ranch, but not because of those heinous crimes. Manson and most of the family were arrested instead for stealing cars. But they were released on a technicality and fled to Death Valley. There, they were arrested again in multiple waves of police raids between Oct. 10 and 12, 1969. In addition to a series of thefts and generally terrorizing the locals, Manson had set fire to some heavy​

Listening to a song plays an important role in our lives because we ca express our ideas and emotions while listen to it.
Now you going to listen to your favorite song,read its lyrics and may choose to do any of the following​

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Convince Your Clan: The year is 8000 BCE. Your clan must decide whether to become part of the Neolithic Agricultural Revolution or to remain nomadic hunter-gatherers. Use the resources from this lesson and our Learn About It to develop a convincing argument either FOR or AGAINST the Agricultural Revolution. You should include at least 3 pieces of evidence to support your argument Your argument should be written in complete sentences

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True or False: Lord Capulet threatens to disown Juliet from his family if she does not marry Paris

Which statement best describes how "Malala the Powerful" and "The Strangers That Came to Town" address the theme that people can reach their potential when they are accepted for being who they are?

In "Malala the Powerful," Malala feels proud when is allowed to learn freely and safely; in "The Strangers That Came to Town," the Duvitches make friends when they are recognized as kind and generous.

In "Malala the Powerful," the Taliban thrives in Pakistan because the people are too afraid to confront them; in "The Strangers That Came to Town," the Duvitches attempt to fit in with their neighbors so they will be better liked.

In "Malala the Powerful," Malala is glad to continue going to school even when it has to be secret; in "The Strangers That Came to Town," Tom and Andy are dismayed when their prank with the fish is discovered.

In "Malala the Powerful," Malala becomes a famous blogger even though she writes under a pseudonym; in "The Strangers That Came to Town," Mr. Duvitch is proud to show Father that he is a good fisherman.

Does the G in sugar a soft or hard g?​

What does the story suggest about how the characters (in Volar) have been shaped by their environment? About how they feel about it, and why?

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what type of poem is most likely to have a melodic rhythm

A.) Free verse

B.) Fixed rhyme scheme

summarize the biblical story of Moses

How is sentence 20 correctly punctuated?

(20) In spite of her dyslexia, Maria, with the help of specialists has learned to read and write above her grade level.
A.
remove the comma after dyslexia
B.
remove the comma after Maria
C.
add a comma after specialists
D.
add a comma after read

Read the lines from "My Father is a Simple Man."

and tells me the orange
has seeds and so is perpetual;
and we too will come back
like the orange trees.

How does the word choice in the lines convey the speaker's father's view on life?


He believes that a good life starts with good nutrition.

He thinks one should search for the simple things in life.

He knows that life is a cycle of death and rebirth.

He feels that a life worth living is one spent in nature.

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All Aboard the freedom Train
by Irene Latham

Come now passengers,
throw off your chains!

Take your place on the train
that runs underground.

Its wheels are people
who arrange secret stations,

its whistle blows,
freeeeeeeeeeee-dom.

Follow Harriet --
your conductor, your guide.

Brave hunger and darkness
to outsmart your captors.

With a runaway's speed
and a locomotive's power,

time now
to steam into your future.

Part 1: What is the structure of the text?
a)cause and effect
b)compare and contrast
c)problem and solution
d)chronological

Part 2: How does the structure of the poem contribute to the authors message in the poem?

THE GOLDEN KITE How does the relationship between the two Mandarins develop over the course of the story? Use details from the text to support your response.

Haneen stayed an actress. What is the predicate noun?

Contrast the churro's worth and position in Spain just before it came to the United States with its position and worth in
its early days in the United States.

In the story Oscars Wilde play What is most likely meaning of the word earnest in this scene?
A. honest
B. decitful
C. rude
D. a man's name

What does Charis triumph over in the song "The Triumph of Charis"?

Men consider her more beautiful than any element in nature.
She can get a chariot ride wherever she wants to go.
Her beauty and charm have all men wishing to be by her side.
None of the above

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Sophie sat down on the couch with a book in one hand and her hot
chocolate in the other. She could think of no better way to spend a
snowy day indoors than reading a good book. Turning on the television
to check the weather forecast, she noticed that her favorite movie was
on. Sophie quickly turned off the TV. Today she would avoid the
temptation to become a nonreading couch potato.
Which statement most clearly shows how the author uses point of view to
develop the character in this story?
A. The author uses first-person point of view to reveal Sophie's
thoughts about watching television and reading.
B. The author uses third-person limited point of view to show the
conflict between Sophie's desires to read a book and play in the
snow.
C. The author uses first-person point of view to show the feelings
Sophie experiences when she realizes her favorite movie is on
television.
D. The author uses third-person limited point of view to reveal
Sophie's determination to spend the day reading a book.

A burning candle involves which energy transformation?

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Read the following excerpt from 'Summer Night, Riverside by Sara Teasdale:
In the wild soft summer darkness
How many and many a night we two together
Sat in the park and watched the Hudson
Wearing her lights like golden spangles
Glinting on black satin.
The rail along the curving pathway
Was low in a happy place to let us cross,
And down the hill a tree that dripped with bloom
Sheltered us
While your kisses and the flowers,
Falling, falling,
Tangled my hair....
The frail white stars moved slowly over the sky.
Which statement best explains how the poet's use of figurative language
conveys the poem's tone?
A. The phrases "lights like golden spangles" and "Glinting on black
satin" convey a greedy tone.
B. The phrases "How many and many a night" and "frail white stárs
moved slowly" convey a wistful tone.
C. The phrases "frail white stars moved slowly" and "wild soft
summer darkness" convey a dangerous tone.
D. The phrases "lights like golden spangles" and "a tree that dripped
with bloom" convey a joyful tone.