The writer wants to revise the passage so that it does not contain any inappropriate shifts in tone. To achieve this goal, which of the following sentences should the writer delete?

Sentence 5
A

Sentence 7
B

Sentence 11
C

Sentence 15
D

Sentence 16

Answer:Sentence 16

Explanation:Sentence 16 departs from the tone of the rest of the passage by presenting a negative value judgment about people who chose a vegetarian diet. I also did the exam on AP classroom

The sentence that the writer should delete would be:

D). Sentence 16

The 16th sentence needs to be deleted in order to eliminate any kind of inadequacy in the tone of the passage.

This sentence variates the perspective that the author chooses to convey his message to the readers in between and may also influence the response displayed by them.

Therefore, it needs to be eliminated to ensure the tone remains consistent and elicits the desired response.

Hence, the correct option is D.

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