Read the following passage, which is lacking in vivid description, imagery, and dialogue. Rewrite the passage to include description and dialogue in a way that helps convey a nervous tone.

My brother Felipe and I walked up to the abandoned house at the end of the street. Felipe opened the gate, and we walked forward. We walked all the way up to the door and knocked, but no one answered. I leaned over the railing and looked in the window, and it was pretty empty in there. Then there was a noise inside the house, and we left.​

Answers

Answer 1

Answer:

My brother Felipe and I walked up to a creped abandoned house at the end of the street. Felipe opened the rusted iron gate, and we walked forward. We walked all the way up to the old banish door and knocked, but no one answered. I leaned over the rusted railing and looked in the window, and it was pretty empty in there. Then there was an animus screeching noise coming from inside the house, out of tarred we left.


Related Questions

Write a near-future thriller where a piece of everyday technology has turned against your character — and only your character. Must be 1000-3000 words.

Answers

Answer:

what was wrong with my anwer

Explanation:

Which sentence contains a simile?(1 point)

Henry thought for a very long time that a lake was the same as a pond.

He was like a giant ogre reaching for his dinner.

William liked the way his new house smelled of pine trees.

The walls grew thick with ivy as the years passed.

Answers

Answer:

number 2?

Explanation:

Answer:

B. He was like a giant ogre reaching for his dinner

Explanation:

A simile has Like and as and a metaphor does not

Read the list of details from the article.

Anne McClain and Christina Koch will venture out together about 240 miles above the Earth, and make history.
Both McClain and Koch were members of NASA's 2013 astronaut class, half of which comprised women.
When asked in a February interview about the importance of conducting her mission during Women's History Month, she said, "It is a unique opportunity and I hope that I'm able to inspire folks that might be watching."
Noting that she did not have many engineers to look up to growing up in Jacksonville, North Carolina, McClain hopes "to be an example to people that might not have someone to look at as a mentor ..."
Which two details taken together provide the BEST evidence to support the idea that McClain wants to make an impact on people through her work as an astronaut?

A
1 and 2
B
1 and 3
C
2 and 4
D
3 and 4

Answers

Answer: B

Explanation: In the first paragraph it states stuff about how they want to make history, and in the 3rd it states how she wants to inspire people.
B 1 and 3 is the answer

How many pieces of grass is there

Answers

Answer:

60

Explanation:

60 pieces of grass ...................

Read the poem.

The Whippoorwill
by Madison Julius Cawein

I.

Above lone woodland ways that led
To dells the stealthy twilights tread
The west was hot geranium red;
And still, and still,
Along old lanes the locusts sow
With clustered pearls the Maytimes know,
Deep in the crimson afterglow,
We heard the homeward cattle low,
And then the far-off, far-off woe
Of "whippoorwill!" of "whippoorwill!"

II.

Beneath the idle beechen boughs
We heard the far bells of the cows
Come slowly jangling towards the house;
And still, and still,
Beyond the light that would not die
Out of the scarlet-haunted sky;
Beyond the evening-star's white eye
Of glittering chalcedony,
Drained out of dusk the plaintive cry
Of "whippoorwill," of "whippoorwill."

III.

And in the city oft, when swims
The pale moon o'er the smoke that dims
Its disc, I dream of wildwood limbs;
And still, and still,
I seem to hear, where shadows grope
Mid ferns and flowers that dewdrops rope,
Lost in faint deeps of heliotrope
Above the clover-sweetened slope,
Retreat, despairing, past all hope,
The whippoorwill, the whippoorwill.

Whippoorwill - a nocturnal bird with a distinctive call that is suggestive of its name

Question 1
Part A

What is a theme of “The Whippoorwill?


People sometimes long for what they cannot have.

In order to move forward, people must leave the past behind.

Nature soothes the heart and calms the mind.

There is a balance between nature and the city.
Question 2
Part B

How does the theme in Part A develop in the poem?


The woeful sound of the whippoorwill echos the despair the speaker feels living in the city.

The speaker thinks he hears the sound of the whippoorwill while walking in the city.

The city sky is filled with cloudy, gray smoke and it makes the speaker feel sad that the moon is hidden.

The speaker recalls his fondest memories of nature while living in the city.

Answers

Answer:

hjkjkjk

Explanation:

Read the excerpt from The Boy Who Harnessed the Wind by William Kamkwamba.

News of the machine had spread to the villages, and people were starting to arrive. The traders spotted it from their stalls and packed up their things. The truckers left their vehicles along the roads. Everyone walked into the valley, and now gathered in its shadow. I recognized these faces. Some of these people had mocked me for months, and still they whispered, even laughed. More of them were coming. It was time.

What does this paragraph reveal about Kamkwamba?

He feels pride and is relaxed about the windmill.
He feels tense and hopes the windmill will work.
He feels great dislike for all of the villagers.
He feels destined to make the windmill.

Answers

He feels tense and hopes the windmill will work.

Answer:

He feels tense and hopes the windmill will work.

Explanation:

¨and now gathered in its shadow. I recognized these faces. Some of these people had mocked me for months, and still they whispered, even laughed. More of them were coming. It was time.¨

Which sentence contains an example of alliteration?(1 point)

Emery walked down the street as if the pavement were hot lava.

Felix, frantic over the new schedule, forgot his homework.

Jared spoke in a loud voice that echoed through the woods.

The wind howled through the trees during the storm.

Answers

Answer:

Felix, frantic over the new schedule, forgot his homework.

Explanation:

Most of the first letters of words in the sentence start with F :)

the 2nd one is an example of alliteration

what should I do if my dad keeps yelling at me and says I have to yell at you every week but he does not and he always gets mad at me for anything that happens like if there is a ramen noodle wrapper on the counter that my mom put there and he goes off on me almost about to whoop me what should I do?

Answers

call social services or talk to them

Answer:

hey .i know what youre going through.and i just want you to know that youre not alone.just try and do your best.dont worry about what he thinks about you.if it starts getting out of hand,u have to stick up for yourself.you derserve way better.trust me my dad does the same thing.dont worry,,it will be over soon

Explanation:

Which of the following is TRUE about the journeys made by the dogs in the study? *
The dogs always followed at least part of their original route back to their owners.
The dogs always followed their scent trail back to their owners.
The majority of dogs took the same route when leaving and returning to their owners.
The majority of dogs followed a different route when returning to their owners.

Answers

Answer:

B

Explanation:

The dog always followed their scent to get back home to there owners

The answer is B
In the study, the dogs always found their way back to their owners. They followed the scent trail.

Hope this helped

why does the narrator include the following detail in the story ´he was immediately fascinated by the beautiful stranger´

Answers

Answer: its the fourth one

Explanation:

Answer:

Number 3

Explanation:

Can someone plz help me with this!!!!

Answers

Answer:

put the comma after country's

Explanation:

Although the Mexican was economy is growing steadily nearly half of the country’s, more than one hundred million people live in poverty.

PLEASE HELP i don’t have much time left :/

Answers

Answer:

2nd one

Explanation:

The second one :)) hope it helped

The Wright Tricycle factory uses one seat, two handle grips, and three tires for every tricycle that it makes. Select a numeric ratio for the following phrase: the number of tires to the number of tricycles.

A1:3
B3:1
C2:1
D3:2

Answers

B the answer 3:1
I think so

Here go my song I made I only made one part so here go
Ian Care bout yuh, u betta get out my life, get these bullets in yo head uh


This all I got n it's a rap
What is 10^3

Answers

Yassssss that is a awesome song

In what ways will the human race evolve in the next thousand years?

Answers

We may be taller, We may also merge with machines that can enhance our hearing, eyesight, health, etc. and we may be moved to Mars

Explanation:

We will evolve in a variety of ways, for example:

we will most likely be taller.the weight average of a human will be bigger.More people will wear glasses as our eyes will be weaker.

sorry it’s not much! I hope it helps.

Read the excerpt from “Tools of the Spymaster."

The numbers that Major Tallmadge assigned to members of the Culper Ring were from a secret writing system he invented. He substituted digits for words that would be used in messages. "Long Island," for example, was 728, "arms" was 7, and "city" was 88. There was a number for each month, such as 341 for "January." He made four copies of his codes. He kept one and gave the others to Woodhull, Townsend, and General Washington. For words that did not have a number code, Tallmadge gave his agents a cipher. In a cipher, each letter in a message is replaced by another letter or a number.

The author’s purpose in this excerpt is to

A)teach readers about a code system used during the American Revolution.
B)persuade readers that ciphers are the greatest American invention.
C)argue that Major Tallmadge made a mistake in sharing copies of his codes.
D)compare the American codes for secret letters to the British codes.

Answers

teach readers about a code system used during the American Revolution

What is Doris' joke ? (look at lines 15-23)

Answers

Answer:

Please tell us about the chapter

Explanation:

so that we can answer u

Answer:

njnjnokobbyt

Explanation:

Which statement best evaluates the author's use of dialogue to enhance the
narrative?

Answers

Answer:

C

Explanation: The dialogue is that’s because it emphasizes the characters friendship and they have fun together I just answered this question on my quiz

44 POINTS PLEASE HELP!!!!! I'D REALLY APPRECIATE IT! ALSO MARKING BRAINLIEST!

Write a 1 to 2 paragraph evaluation of the essay titled "Take Another Look at Electric Cars". Use your graphic organizer and include textual evidence.


Heres the essay:

Take Another Look at Electric Cars


The average automobile driver pays $2,000 annually for gasoline. That $2,000 of gas is contributing to both the United States’ dependency on foreign countries and environmental pollution. Electric cars are beneficial for their owners and for the environment. Anybody who is buying a new car should consider purchasing an electric car.

Electric vehicles have a reputation as being expensive, but that has changed in the past few years. Purchase prices have been dropping and a federal tax credit lowers their actual cost even more. The average cost of a brand new gas automobile is approximately $31,500. Most new electric cars are priced between $30,000 and $40,000. That is a higher initial cost, but when you factor in the $7,500 federal tax credit (and possible additional state tax credits, depending on where you live), the price becomes comparable to that of a gasoline car. The annual costs associated with owning a car are much lower with an electric car. The average driver pays about $2,000 a year for gas. The average cost of electricity for a year of driving is $500. That will save $1,500 a year in fuel. Additionally, a more modern and streamlined engine will save drivers in other maintenance fees. One government study estimated that electric-car drivers will save over 40 percent in annual maintenance fees.

One of the biggest arguments against electric cars has been their limited range. Electric cars do have a shorter range, but that range is plenty for most drivers. The majority of American drivers travel less than 35 miles a day, and the average electric car has a range of about 100 miles on a full charge. Charging the car at home each night will provide enough power for daily driving and allow drivers to save time by avoiding stops at the gas station. And, as the number of electric cars on the road increases, more businesses and employers will install charging stations for their customers and employees, which will make charging a vehicle even easier.

An electric car may not be for everyone, but they have evolved beyond their original restrictions. With a purchase price that is comparable to a gas car, and reduced fuel and maintenance fees, anyone who is purchasing a new car should seriously consider an electric car. Spread the word, and check out an electric car today.



PLZ HELP ;-;

Answers

Answer:

Explanation:

.

Read this sentence from "President Obama's National Address to America's Schoolchildren."

And even when you're struggling, even when you're discouraged, and you feel like other people have given up on you, don't ever give up on yourself…

What does the word discouraged mean?


A. very frightened

B. not hesitating

C. not hopeful

D. out of control

Answers

C because it does so yeah
I believe it is C because not hopeful is basically the definition of discouraged

How does the article "Caring for Vets Should Be National Duty," develop the central ideas that nonprofit organizations are helping veterans and that the government should take more responsibility for caring for veterans?

by explaining how the nonprofit organizations raise funds for veterans and describing how government programs are funded

by listing examples of nonprofit organizations and explaining how these organizations work with the government

by explaining that one nonprofit has been helping veterans for over a decade and emphasizing that the government should be doing more

by describing how services provided to veterans by nonprofit organizations differ from those provided by the government and stating the government services are inferior

Answers

Answer:

C.

Explanation:

I'm reading this story in class currently XD

Answer:

Pretty sure its A

Explanation:

its been listed several times in the paragraph

After ms.whatsit transforms her self what animal is she

Answers

Answer: With Mrs. Who's permission, Mrs. Whatsit transforms herself into a beautiful creature with a horse's body and a human torso. So a centaur.

Explanation: brainliest?

Read the excerpt from the Declaration of Independence.

We hold these truths to be self-evident, that all men are created equal, that they are endowed by their Creator with certain unalienable Rights, that among these are Life, Liberty, and the pursuit of Happiness. That to secure these rights, Governments are instituted among Men, deriving their just powers from the consent of the governed, That whenever any Form of Government becomes destructive of these ends, it is the Right of the People to alter or to abolish it, and to institute new Government . . .

Which statement best describes the relationship between Jefferson’s diction and his purpose?

>Jefferson uses words with neutral connotations to present a claim based on reason and precedent.

>Jefferson uses words with positive connotations to praise his listeners for their political activism.

>Jefferson uses words with neutral connotations to suggest that there is no urgency to his message.

>Jefferson uses words with positive connotations to encourage peaceful relations with Britain.

Answers

Answer:

I Believe the answer would "Jefferson uses words with neutral connotations to present a claim based on reason and precedent."

Explanation: Jefferson dose not try to encourage any peaceful relations after the revolution, Jefferson doesn't try and give no urgency, and he is not praising the listeners either.

She got a body like an hourglass
But I can give it to you all the time


Who sings this?

Answers

Answer:

Jessie J, Ariana Grande and Nicki Minaj

Explanation:

JESSIE J


I’m still and forever in love with this song

Which sentence from the article best supports its author's assertion that Golding's novel was influenced by real-world events?

"It is worth reading, or re-reading, for its entertainment value alone."

"The book was written by William Golding and published in 1954."

"The book forced readers to think about the dark sides of human nature that may tear civilization apart."

"The book was written shortly after World War II , which had taken millions of lives."

Answers

Answer:

The book forced readers to think about the dark sides of human nature that may tear civilization apart

The sentence from the article that best supports its author's assertion that Golding's novel was influenced by real-world events is Option D.

Lord of the Flies

The Text Lord of the Flies is written by William Golding in 1954, the themes on which this book works on are individuality, rationality, and morality.

Since, it was written after WW2, and have many references to WW, best sentence which supports the Author's article asserting that Golding's novel was influenced by real-world events is "The book was written shortly after World War II , which had taken millions of lives."

Learn more about WW2 here:

https://brainly.com/question/651584

When is valentines day?

Answers

Answer:

February 14

Explanation:

The answer is February 14! :)

How does the change in settings from the nursery plot to the greenhouse advance the plot?

Answers

By allowing Saeng to discover the plants she is searching for. Seang wishes to abandon her search and leave the nursery but she goes to the greenhouse anyway.
It is essential in teaching Saeng about her past. How does the change in settings from the nursery to the greenhouse advance the plot? ... They look first in the nursery and then in the greenhouse before they find that the plant is a hibiscus. Saeng brings a leaf to a flower shop and asks the florist to identify its plant.

Can someone help me out I’m marking brainliest if correct!

Answers

Answer:

A?

Explanation:

I have no idea if I'm right but I tried.

:)

Answer:

I need alittle more context but I think it is A

Explanation:

It is the only resonable answer.

Hope this helped!

How does the actions of these protestors relate to the actions of protestors today? Explain your answer with specific details.

Answers

Answer:

Explanationwich protesters

:

when Kevin is on Max's shoulders they are called "Freak the Mighty." Why are they called this?

Answers

Answer: I've read this before, they are called this because they are powerful together. Kevin is the "Freak", and Max is the "Mighty". They are called this because when together, they make "Freak The Mighty".

Explanation:

Other Questions
how does the structure of the story create suspense?Read the passage you may even get brainliest Find the value of k please 1. peches2. pomrtumip3. clipbu4. ssenidaer 9Whem did you deliver the mail! change into passive voice HELPPP MEEEEEEE PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZ Please answer Thanks Which process describes how many pure-bred dogs have been produced?A. CloningB. Crossbreeding C. Selective breeding The price of a pair of earrings is $22 but Priya buys them on sale for $13.20.By how much was the price discounted? What was the ancient name of the continent of Africa by native peoples? Two processes needed for survival of life on this planet are cellular respiration and photosynthesis. How are cellular respiration and photosynthesis mutually dependent ?A. Photosynthesis releases energy and cellular respiration stores energy.B. Photosynthesis releases carbon dioxide and cellular respiration releases oxygen.C. Photosynthesis removes oxygen from the atmosphere and cellular respiration replaces it. D. Photosynthesis removes carbon dioxide from the atmosphere and cellular respiration replaces it.??? 2What two factors cause monsoons? Which expression is equivalent to 7(-7v - 7) - v?-49V - 50-50v - 49-8V - 49-50v - 7 Jin monitors and enforces security in courts of law. His job title is best described as.Kamala performs investigations to solve crimes. Her job title is best described as.Latanya monitors a rural area to enforce laws and protect public safety. Her job title is best described as.Cole performs laboratory tests on crime scene evidence. His job title is best described as. Determine the equation of the tangent to x 3x +1 at the point (3,1) What are the terms to this polynomial: 4x2 + 9x - 1/2 In a bag there are blue sweets, red sweets and yellow sweets. The number of blue sweets is four times the number of yellow sweets. The number of red sweets is half the number of yellow sweets. Find the percentage of sweets in the bag that are yellow. My symptoms include point tenderness that increases with pressure on the bottom of the foot Sofia is a helper for the kindergarten class and is in charge of picking a video for their end-of-year party. To choose which type of movie they would like best, she decided to survey every other child entering a matinee for a cartoon called, Three Pretty Princesses. The total number of children surveyed was 40. What is wrong with the way she selected her sample? Check all that apply. ill give brainliest to whoever answers Es una.Es la una.Son la una.Son las una.which is most correct? 1When the Constitution was first written, who held thepower to decide who could vote?