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Read the rough draft of a student’s conclusion to an argumentative editorial.

(1) Year-round schooling would help student achievement. (2) Not so much information would have to be crammed into nine months. (3) Furthermore, the elimination of long breaks, particularly summer break, would significantly reduce "learning loss” and the additional time wasted at the beginning of each academic year to reteach previously learned material. (4) It is clear that year-round schooling helps students learn and retain more. (5) The United States is not the only country to experiment with a year-round school schedule. (6) Although many still claim that evidence about year-round school and its link to higher achievement is inconclusive, these people need to open their eyes and see that students in these schools consistently score higher on certain assessments than students who attend schools with traditional nine-month calendars. (7) It is about time that we replaced our outdated and inefficient school calendars.

Which best revises sentence 6 to create a more appropriate and respectful tone?

Although many still claim that evidence about year-round school and its link to higher achievement is inconclusive, studies consistently reveal that year-round students score higher on certain assessments than those students who attend schools with traditional nine-month calendars.
Although many still claim that evidence about year-round school and its link to higher achievement is inconclusive, this theory is wrong because students in year-round schools consistently score higher on certain assessments than those students who attend schools with traditional nine-month calendars.
Although many still claim that evidence about year-round school and its link to higher achievement is inconclusive, they would admit defeat if only they would do their research and find that students in year-round schools consistently score higher on certain assessments than those students who attend schools with traditional nine-month calendars.
Although many still claim that evidence about year-round school and its link to higher achievement is inconclusive, these people need to study their facts and acknowledge that students in year-round schools consistently score higher on certain assessments than those students who attend schools with traditional nine-month calendars.

Answer: Although many still claim that evidence about year-round school and its link to higher achievement is inconclusive, studies consistently reveal that year-round students score higher on certain assessments than those students who attend schools with traditional nine-month calendars.

Explanation:

Any argumentative editorial should always maintain a respectful tone to convey a point positively and affirmatively, based on evidence rather than personal believes or opinions. A counterargument should not attack those who differ from our position but provide evidence to disprove their claims.

Phrases such as "these people need to open their eyes", "they would admit defeat if only they would do their research", and "these people need to study their facts" are baseless accusations of researchers not doing their jobs properly. The best way to make a counterclaim against the opposite idea would be to establish supporting evidence, which is accomplished with the phrase "studies consistently reveal that".

The narrator's aside "In any case, it's easy to get sentimental about the dead, and to guard against that I want to tell a quick Curt Lemon story" is an example of:

Select one:
A) Euphemism
B) Irony
C)Pathos
D) Hyperbole


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a) You WAS/WERE breaking the rules.​

What does this mean? (pls help)
"Force creates resistance. great relationships build autonomy which allows us to leverage trust, which builds massive influence."

Directions: Please DETERMINE whether the following statement is TRUE or FALSE:
"In Shakespeare's day, children could determine their own lives and make their own choices."
True
False

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Which two details from the passage best support the inference in Part A?


"A mechanical doll could have done what she did."

"It had begun just as all her other days began: bells at dawn, maids running in and out to hurry her into her clothes, and the Assistant Chamberlain barking a schedule…"

"She wouldn't get to do so, of course, but she could hope. She always hoped."

"She was decoration, giving people a bit of the royal glamor without ever doing any real work."

The following lines of poetry are an example of which sound device
This is the pond, and these are my feet.
This is the rooster, and this is more of my feet.
1. alliteration
2. repetition
3. onomatopoeia
4. rhyme

Question 3
Determine whether the following sentences are written with consistent
verb tense and do not need to be changed, or if they are written with
inconsistent verb tense and need to be changed.
When his mother passed away, Hamilton became an orphan.
a. change became to become
b. change became to becomes
C. change when to if
d. no change is needed.

Define Volcanism in your own words. (That means don't copy)

Which correctly describes a difference
between Passage 1 and Passage 2?

the passage above.. a.summarizes the main idea of the newspaper article
b.disagrees with the main idea of the newspaper article
c.expressed the authors anger over the vogue magazine cover
d. demands that people stop talking about the vogue magazine cover

Ryan depends too much on his car. He cannot even what it would be like to live without cars. He
would not be able to what to do if he did not have his car.
A.
fathom - understand
B
imagine - fake
C.
picture - photograph
D.
understand - dream

Which of the following describes a pun? (1 point) A. a playful use of synonyms to achieve humor in writing. B.the use of a noun to serve as the verb in a sentence C. the final sentence of a joke that contains the punchline D. a joke using words that sound alike but have different meanings​

Prepositional Phrases:
Most songs for children are silly and make kids happy.
A. Most songs
B. For children
C. Are silly
D. Make kids happy

I NEED ANSWERS!!!! if you were to interview Malala, what 2 interview questions would you ask and why would you ask them. provide two pieces of evidence from the text to support why you ask those questions. use the RACED rubric as your guide.​

What is one thing that is important for an audience to understand about the characters in "A Raisin in the Sun"?

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Crutch Words, Informal Speech

A speaker says:
I kinda wanted to go to the park today. Do you wanna come along?

Which of the following is the correct way to transcribe this according to our Clean Verbatim Style Guide?

A) I kinda wanted to go to the park today. Do you wanna come along?
B) I wanted to go to the park today. Do you want to come along?
C) I kind of wanted to go to the park today. Do you want to come along?

To change a written piece and make it better is to _____.


publish

revise

embellish details

Rima is writing an essay with the following claim:
The money recently donated to the city should be used to update the
city zoo.
Which statement should Rima include in her essay to best anticipate and
respond to a counterclaim to her argument?
A. By hiring local students and investing in recycled materials, the
city could save thousands of dollars on the proposed zoo updates,
B. Many citizens believe that the city should focus money on projects
that are more urgent and important than the zoo, including fixing
roads and improving schools.
c. Some may argue that the needed updates will be too costly, but
the city can save money by organizing a team of volunteers from
the community

How should a presentation script differ from a research report?
It should sound more like a story.

It should be based on personal experience.

It should include more direct quotes.

It should be shorter and more to the point.

Help me to solve this question

Write a paragraph that objectively summarizes the first chapter of Fitzgerald's The Great Gatsby and explains its purpose.

Classify the following sentences as simile, metaphor, or hyperbole
1. This coffee shop is an ice box!
2. I've told you a million times to clean your room!
3. She's drowning in a sea of grief.
4. She's happy as a clam.
5. I move fast like a cheetah on the Serengeti.
6. Her head was spinning from all the new information.
7. Jasmine never forgets anything.
8. The wheels of justice turn slowly.

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is cereal considered soup

In sinners in the hands of an Angry God how does the speaker describe the earth

“Word that the Akron AWOL blew up the Chop Shop zigs like lightning through every Unwind, and disobedience erupts into a full-scale revolt”. This is an example of what type of figurative language?

A: Simile
B: Metaphor
C: Idiom
D: Hyperbole

What happens in the opening scene of Macbeth?

La 12. Early morning is the best time to catch fish.

Adjectives and nouns

Ryan bought 4 pounds of flour. He used all the flour to make 6 batches of cookies with 18 in each. How many cookies were made from 2 pounds of flour​

My car is almost out of gas we won't make it to the next town how can you fix this sentence