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Loneliness affects peoples’ choices and behaviors because of the way a person is treated by others.

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Answer 1

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it sounds good i can relate to it

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Answer 2

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instead of repeating the word person use the word "they"

End Result:

Loneliness affects peoples’ choices and behaviors because of the way they are treated by others.


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The palm leaves were swaying in the air, as graceful as a ballerina.

The palm trees stood side to side, as if they were saluting to each other.

The palm trees were gigantic and omnipresent, stood as tall as a hundred feet.

Some of the palm trees were low, stumpy and frail, some seemingly very gentle, as if they were a graceful swan.

Answer:

The Palm tree is as tall as a skyscraper.

The Palm tree looks like a Tall tower full of green leaves.

The Palm tree is as tall as a giraffe.

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Yes, because she is young. As a young character, she can encourage other girls around her age, or even above, to fight for their rights. Because young characters can influence other people to...
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Malala is young. Is she a good figure to fight for girls’ education? Why or why not?

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Answer and Explanation:

Yes, because she is young. As a young character, she can encourage other girls around her age, or even above, to fight for their rights. Because young characters can influence other people to take action and react against adverse situations they may be experiencing. This is because these characters show that it is possible for a person with little age and few experiences to cause great transformations not only in the community itself, but worldwide. This also encourages older people, who understand that if such an unexpected person can promote such beneficial situations, they, who have more wisdom and are experienced, can promote even more beneficial situations.

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According to one theme in modern American dramas, Americans are exceptional _______________ of the world.
A) immigrants
B)citizens
C) families
D) members
E) patriots

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Answer:

the answer is B

Explanation:

American exceptionalism which is depicted in modern American dramas, states that, Americans are exceptional citizens of the world, who are superior than the other world.

What is American exceptionalism?

American exceptionalism is the believe of United States that the Americans are inherently different and superior than the other nations because of the history social and political history they have faced.

The modern American dramas have one theme that the Americans are exceptional citizens of the world as they believe themselves to be superior to others in the world.

Therefore, option, B, citizens, is correct.

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Can society ever be fair as long as people do not have equal talents and abilities?

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Answer:

No, that is why there is the saying "life isn't always fair." There will always be someone smarter, stronger, faster, taller, skinnier, etc.

Explanation:

If I can't swim, then I wouldn't get into the Olympics for swimming because there's someone out there who has trained and can swim very fast and the Olympics would much rather have them over me. Technically speaking, that's not fair because I should have a chance to race in the Olympics even as someone who can't swim well. But that is the way life works and that's how we're a functioning society; some people are just better at some things than other people are and some people work harder for the things they want, so they excel. Society has never and will never be fair, but that's the way things function.

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Will mark Brainliest if you can help me it's due today, What central claim(s) do the authors make in the final two paragraphs of "Satyagraha"?

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Answer:  “Sugar crushed people, and yet it was because of sugar that Gandhi began his  experiment in truth—so that every individual could free him- or herself.”  (Central Claim)

what is evidence in an argument essay ?
A- data
B-counterclaim
C-Thesis
D-informative and supportive claim

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Answer:

A- data

Explanation:

you use data as evidence to back up your claim

5. The passage is primarily concerned with
(A) discussing a novel that strongly influenced
the work of Native American women
writers
(B) describing developments in the Native
American literary tradition
(C) challenging a theory about the work of a.
particular Native American author
(D) contrasting the works of three Native
American authors
6. In the context of the passage, the word "body"
(line 6) most nearly means
(A) organization
(B) size
(C) human being
(D) collection
7. The passage suggests that Hale, Silko, and
Cook are
(A) primarily interested in writing poetry
(B) helping to reshape Native American
literature
(C) better at writing short stories than novels
(D) working exclusively with traditional
literary forms

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Answer:

5. (B) describing developments in the Native  American literary tradition.

6. (D) collection.

7. (B) helping to reshape Native American  literature.

Explanation:

The above are the correct answers.

From the passage, we discover that the passage is primarily concerned with the developments that took place in the Native American literary tradition. It revealed how Cook combined poetry and prose in her "Then The Badger Said" which introduced another approach in the Native American literary tradition. Hale and Silko added anew genre in the collection of literature by Native  American women.

These developments led to the reshaping of the Native Native American  literature.

Jonathan drops out of high school after eleventh grade. Which of the following facts about Jonathan is TRUE: A. He will make about $1,000,000 more in his lifetime than his friends who graduated from high school. B. He is at a higher risk for unemployment. C. He will make about $2,000,000 more than his friends with college degrees because he started to work earlier in his life. D. By dropping out, he is helping his community by becoming a productive citizen. Please select the best answer from the choices provided A B C D

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Answer:

B, its kind of necessary to have a high school diploma, a college degree and/or experience. He could get a job at fast food but it won't be a GOOD job where he can make a living out of

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Respond to the following prompt by stating your claim.
Prompt:
Parents have the single most impact on their children in terms of instilling values of justice and self-control.

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Answer:

parents is the first god to all.

Parents have the single most impact on their children in terms of instilling values of justice and self-control.

all the parents do not want their children bad and being worst. they have responsibility for their children for their better future.

What is the term for the emotion that a word stirs in a reader?​

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Answer:

The connotation of a word refers to the connection, feelings, or emotions that a word stirs up in the minds of people who hear it or read it.

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defnition of culture

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Answer:

the arts and other manifestations of human intellectual achievement regarded collectively.

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A culture is a pattern of behavior shared by a society, or group of people. Culture is also a word for the 'way of life' of groups of people, meaning the way they do things.

6. What is the theme of a literary selection in "a lady's tale?

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The central theme in Frank Stockton's "The Lady or the Tiger?" is choices and consequences. The premise of the story revolves around the semi-barbaric king whose system of justice features letting the accused choose between two identical doors, one of which has a vicious tiger and the other a fair lady.

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Answer:

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Metaphors for
12. The bear is
13. My mother is
14. The players are
15. They were

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Answer:

The bear is a big stuffed toy

My mother is a shining athlete

The players are shining stars

They were a big hungry lion

Explanation:

How should this sentence be changed to correct the subject-verb agreement?

The pounding of the hammer together with the whirring of the saw produces a racket.
Answer choices for the above question

A. Change produces to produce

B. Change saw to saws

C. Change produces to were producing

D. No change needs to be made to this sentence.

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Answer:

Explanation:

No change needs to be made to this sentence.

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No change needs to be made to this sentence.

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3 Miserable and brokenhearted, Jiang hung his head as he walked through the forest. Good fortune soon came to him, however, when he bumped into a compassionate old man who felt sorry for Jiang’s loss.
In paragraph 3, the word compassionate means
A) indifferent.
B) kindhearted.
C) mature.
D) stern.

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The answer would be : B Kindhearted

Answer:

B: kindhearted

Explanation:

Compassionate and kindhearted are similar.

What best describes how the monster feels at the beginning of the story? powerful, victorious, strong and empowered tired, worn, listless and resigned energetic, ambitious, excited and curious furious, vengeful, tormented and despised

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Answer:

Strong and empowered, excited and curious, tormented and despised.

Explanation:

Although you did not say what this question is about, I believe you are referring to the monster book "Frankenstein". In relation to this, we can say that the monster, at the beginning of the book, feels very curious and excited about the world around him. That's because he has a very active brain and an impressive ability to learn. He also feels strong and vigorous, but is plagued with the feeling of abandonment he has. It is this feeling that causes him to cause many problems.

we often refuse to accept an idea merely because the way in which it has been expressed is unsympathetic to us

What does this mean

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Explanation:

this means in a lot of cases people judge us and we normally don't like it and refuse the idea because we are expecting the people who are judging us to be more sympathetic then judgemental .

8. What story does Charles Darnay relay to the Manettes? What is Dr. Manette’s reactions?(A Tale of Two Cities, Book 4)

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Answer:

A story about a prisoner discretely leaving an instruction on the floor whilst in prison.

Dr Mannete was deeply troubled and startled by the story.

Explanation:

A couple of months after his acquittal from his trial in court, Charles Darnay decides to pay the Manettes a visit at their home in Soho, France.

Whilst discussing, Darnay related a story he heard on a recent trip to the Tower of London where a prisoner discretely left an instruction by writing the inscription 'D.I.G' on the floor of the prison house.

Charles Darnay went on to say that years later when the ground underneath the inscription 'D.I.G' was dug up, an old leather suitcase with the ashes of a letter was found.

Dr Manette did not receive the story very well. He was startled and his face became very pale as if he was not feeling well. Clearly, the story struck a wrong chord with him as it reminded him of events while he was imprisoned.

Use commas to correctly punctuate the appositive in each sentence.

Her reign lasting 22 years was successful.

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Her reign, lasting 22 years, was successful.

why books are an important part of our society. Which values do they symbolize?

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Answer:

Books are an important part of society to not only motivate us to "write" our life story but encourage us to move on with life and influence our personalities.

Explanation:

They symbolize growth and imagination. Books come in a variety of different things and the more you read the better your English or talking and writing structure is. Books not only influence society as a way of talking to each other but also an educational growth in society. More diverse books are read the more diverse and educated opinions. Books basically shape our way of thoughts and personality which tie into society because well...

Which graph represents the equation y=-4/3x-2 Vote braliest if right

Graph one is A.
Graph two is B
Graph three is C
Graph four is D.

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Answer: C

Explanation:

The Race

SETTING: The school track, Saturday afternoon

Scene 1
JAMES: I am nervous about our track meet today. (James shakes his head and paces.)
HEATHER: You don't need to be nervous; it will be fun.
JAMES: That's what everyone keeps saying, but I have been training to win this track meet.
HEATHER: Well, you will do great today, James—just don't get too worked up about it.
JAMES: Yes, you are right. The weather is nice, and I'm sure our whole team will do well.
HEATHER: There you go! That's the attitude!
JAMES: I'm sure you will do great too, Heather! Let's go out there and win!
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How does scene 1 develop this drama?


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Answer:

answer below

Explanation:

the use of emotions. they use the emotion of nervousness to make the watcher want to learn if they really are going to win the meet.

Q What Pov is this?

Cindy got her test back and started crying immediately. It was a C. Her mother would never stand for Cs. She felt disappointed. She knew that she would be in big trouble. Then Jen got her test back. Jen cheered. She got a C. Her mother would be so proud. Jen had studied hard for the test and she was satisfied with the results. She felt proud.

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Answer:

Third person point of view.

Explanation:

The author tells the story from the third person, using "she" and they know how each of the characters are feeling.

Sea stars by Barbara Hurd

Which word in paragraph 4 helps the reader understand the meaning of the word contingent?

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The central idea of these lines is the insignificance of nature in humans life.
Explanation:
‘See Stars: A Galaxy at our Feet’ is a beautiful poem written by Barbara Hurd. This poem illustrate the incredible nature, humans, and the life. It we have a look at the opening paragraph, we will get to know how humans consider nature as insignificant.
The very first line’ THE SKY IS PINK this morning and on the shore a whole host of sea stars has been stranded’ depicts how sea stars, a beautiful water creature are left grounded on the shore. As we moves forward, the narrator describes the beautiful night sky and the glittering stars. Stars further make us realize that we are nothing then we compare ourselves to Stars.


1. Who are the Continentals, and why do they come to Redding

2. Why can’t Sam go to the tavern

3. Would Tim have shot same?

4. What do Tim and Meeker feel when Sam turns around and waves from the stone fence

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If I’m not wrong, it might be number three

Some common themes in fiction books and movies are:

Baseball

Good triumphs over Evil

Family comes first

Cooking

Hard work pays off

Which ones are the most common?

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Good triumphs over evil

Answer:

c

Explanation:

Which sentence from Wild Apples suggests that people are resilient and resourceful? A The fruit was hard and green, but looked as if it would be palatable in the winter. B The day was not observed when it first blossomed, nor when it first bore fruit, unless by chickadee. C There was no dancing on the green beneath it in its honor, and now there is no hand to pluck its fruit,—which is only gnawed by squirrels, as I perceive. D Corn and grain, potatoes, peaches, melons, etc., depend altogether on our planting; but the apple emulates man’s independence and enterprise.

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Answer:

D Corn and grain, potatoes, peaches, melons, etc., depend altogether on our planting; but the apple emulates man’s independence and enterprise.

Explanation:

if not then

C There was no dancing on the green beneath it in its honor, and now there is no hand to pluck its fruit,—which is only gnawed by squirrels, as I perceive.

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