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*Snow Day*

*Bill 12 years old

*Joe Bills friend 11 years old

*SCENE 1

*TIME, PLACE, BASIC SETTING, ETC.*

*Narrator,It was a cold winter morning in the middle of January our Characters Bill and Joe(they are BFs)are having fun during a snow day when they hear a loud noise.

*Bill*What was that Noise?

*Joe* I have no idea lets go find out.

*Bill*Yeah it sounded like it came form the forest over there. Lets go!.

*Narrator* The to children wonder into the woods in search of the noise they have heard.

“BANG!!!”

.*Bill* WHOA!!!!!!

Joe* (Whispers) Be quite theres something up there.

Bill* (Says in a low voice)Its an alien spaceship!

*SCENE ENDS*

Scene 2

Bill* Lets hide behind this bush.

*Joe.*Wow thats so weird are you sure?

*Bill.*Im sure. (Whispers)Uh-oh I think the Alien heard us!

Joe* What makes you think that?

Bill* Look!

Narrator* Joe looks over Bill to see the alien fitted in what looks like armor wobbles over to where they are hiding.

Joe* We got to get out of here!!

They Jump out of the bush and the alien looks frightened. It turns around and begins to run wabble away.

Joe*Wait we didn't mean to scare you!!

Bill* I think hes more afraid of us then we are of him.

Joe* Yeah, but we’ve got to help him hes not from here.

Bill* I agree and maybe we will be able to make this Duo a Trio.

Joe*Agreed Lets go!

Narrator* The Duo try to find clues on where the alien has went.

Bill* Joe, its getting late and we can’t find him.

Joe*Here!! A footprint!

Bill* Nice it looks like he went into the cave…

Joe*There he is! In the cave.

Narrator* The boys Cautiously enters the cave where they hear a slight rumbling and a CRASH.

Bill*(Coughs)Joe are you ok?

Joe*(Wheezes) Yeah but I think the cave fell in.

Bill* Yeah.

Joe* Wheres the Alien?

Bill* I think that he is on the other side of the wall.

Joe*We have to save him!

Bill* I know but its pitch black we are going to need to get supplies.

Narrator* The boys return to Joes house where they go into Joes Bedroom Where they got 2 Flashlight Glowsticks and Walkie Talkies.

Joe* I think that we are ready to save a alien!

END OF ACT 2

Scene 3

Narrator*The Boys return to the cave to help the alien. While Joe goes on top of the hill where the entrance to the cave is located while Bill goes in the cave to try find an opening.

Bill* I think that I may have found a small hole but I cant seem to slip through it.

Joe* Ok Ill keep looking up here if I find any holes ill let you know.

Bill* Ok, AHHHHHHH!!!!!!

Joe* Bill? Bill! Are you ok!?!

Bill* Yeah Yeah Im fine but there a bigger problem now.

Joe*Whats That?

Bill* The Aliens stuck under a rock!!

(The alien squirms and wiggles but cant get free.)

Joe*Hold on Im on my way!

Narrator*Bill looks down at the alien and sees he wont survive much longer so Bill takes matters into his own hands.

Bill* I have to save this alien!

(Bill Puts his hand on each side of the rock and begins to pull as hard as he cans)

Bill*(Grunts) Come On!!

Narrator* The rock begins to rise slowly but Bills strength is fading.

Bill*(Whimpers) I cant hold it much longer……

Joe* Hang in there Im on my way!

(The alien sees the effort and determination in Bills face and begins to help in the lifting of the rock)

Bill* All..most..there..

Narrator*As Bill and the alien strain to lift the Huge rock Joe runs as fast as he could to get back to where the where and just as the had used the last amount of there strength trying to lift the rock….Joe leaps into action and with there combined strength the alien shimmies out of underneath the rock. And with a loud thud the rock falls. But everything beings to shake… For The cave is CAVING IN!!

Bill* (Yells) WE’VE GOT TO GET OUT OF HERE!!

Joe*WE WILL NEVER MAKE IT!

(The alien grabs the two boys and takes off running bolt at top speed out of the cave just as the roof falls in. The alien sets them down and bows as if it was saying thank you.)

Bill*(Pants)Whoa what just happened?

Joe*(Mumbles) I have no idea.

(The alien looks at the two boys and pats them gently and there heads. As if he was saying Good Bye. The alien bolts out of sight and soon they see the alien ship fly over there heads out into the unknown universe.)

Bill* The alien saved our lives.

Joe* Yeah.

(As they talk about what has just happened something falls from the sky)

(Clash!)

Bill* What is it?

Joe*Its a figurine...an alien figurine. But what does it mean?

Bill*I think it means never to forget…

Joe* Yeah, Ill never forget today.

Narrator* They boys pretured from the forest and walk toward the sunset arms hung over one another toward the place they call home.

Bill*Yeah, me neither. But we can both agree… it was a great snow day.

*MOVIE/PLAY ENDS*

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Answer 1

Answer:

thats really good the only this is when someone is speaking use : ok but other than that its really great I love the story line

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Answer 2
U did awesome!! Is this your first time?

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My question is : resources is referring to what ? The limestone and clay or the countries?

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Answer:

clay

Explanation:

it is a main resource

Judge Danforth becomes more suspicious of John Proctor when _____.
- John Proctor continually defends his wife
- Danforth realizes he plows on Sundays instead of going to church
- Too many people think that Elizabeth had something to hide
- He decides that Proctor is guilty if his wife is guilty

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Answer:

Danforth realizes he plows on Sundays instead of going to church

Explanation:

What might be some of the results of not marketing to children?​

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Marketing serves to persuade consumers to purchase a particular product or use a service. The advertising often targets a specific group, such as senior citizens or young, single people. Companies selling toys and other youth-oriented products often use psychological tactics to manipulate children into wanting the product. While often effective, marketing to young children comes with disadvantages. According to the American Academy of Pediatrics, a child under eight lacks the ability to understand that the advertisements are solely there to sell them on a product. Young children are more likely to believe anything they hear or see in advertising because they aren't cognitively able to realize the selling purpose. Children don't understand that advertising claims are sometimes embellished or emphasized just to make the sale.

Who got into a fight with Minho at the Gathering?

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Answer:

i dont know l m a o

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Which device does the author use throughout the passage?

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Answer:1.?

Explanation:

Continue the story "it was
Sunday afternoon
washing my cloths near wang chhu, when suddenly.. ​

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Answer:

 Writing a story can be frustrating if you don't have the imagination to do it at the moment. Here are some tips for writing a story.

1. Focus on the action

2. Don't want to cover it all

3. Find an idea and simplify it

4. Don't tell it, show it

5. Maintain structure

6. Don't give all the information, suggest it

7. Keep the suspense

8. Environment with little

Explanation:

"It was  Sunday afternoon . I was washing my cloths near wang chhu, when suddenly I dropped my favorite shirt into the river.

 I had that shirt for a long time and it meant a lot to me, so I had to get it back.

I couldn't get into the river because I can't swim, so I had to think about doing something quick before losing it.

Suddenly I saw a long branch that I could use, I approached the bank of the river and stretched as much as I could until I could finally reach my shirt.

From that moment I was always very careful when washing clothes in the river."

Please answer the question .Thanks

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Answer:

I think it's C.

Explanation:

since the question uses past tense

Answer:

C. had wanted

Explanation:

Lyrica is thinking in past tense and C is in past tense

Which type of essay would you write if given the assignment to convince readers to recycle more?
narrative essay
expository essay
descriptive essay
persuasive essay

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persuasive essay because you’re trying to persuade them to recycle more

Traditionally, what is a characteristic of a sonnet?
A)no rhyme scheme
B)ends in a couplet
C)irregular meter
D)broken line lengths

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Answer:

This question is different for me but I know the answer is........

B. ends in a couplet

Explanation:

Help me please .
What is the right answer ?

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Answer:

Point Guard

Explanation:

The point guard runs the offense and usually is the team's best dribbler and passer.

Answer:

point guard bc small fowards

What parts make up a clause

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A subject and a predicate

in the outsiders book where were opportunities for change

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what does the question mean?

Please Need help asappp

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Answer:

puwede lakihan unti hindi ko makita ehh

Answer:

all five answers are now there

Explanation:


Did you father wash his car?
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Yes. What is this for?

Diagram the sentence: where did she go?

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Answer:

who is she with why is she gone

Which of these is an example of a "where?" question you might ask when
reading a newspaper article?
A. Where should I read this article?
B. Where will this information be useful in my daily life?
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C. Where is the author going with this point?
D. Where have I encountered this information before?

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Answer:

It's sad that I had to miss this question to get the correct answer but the answer is:

WHERE IS THE AUTHOR GOING WITH THIS POINT

Explanation:

Took the test

Select the correct text in the passage.
In a memoir, authors often blend factual information about events with personal reflection on the experience. Which two sentences in this excerpt from Ernest Shackleton's South! show the author reflecting on memories of his experience, rather than recounting factual information?
The apathy which seemed to take possession of some of the men at the frustration of their hopes was soon dispelled. Parties were sent out daily in different directions to look for seals and penguins. We had left, other than reserve sledging rations, about 110 lbs. of pemmican, including the dog-pemmican, and 300 lbs. of flour. In addition there was a little tea, sugar, dried vegetables, and suet. I sent Hurley and Macklin to Ocean Camp to bring back the food that we had had to leave there. They returned with quite a good load, including 130 lbs. of dry milk, about 50 lbs. each of dog-pemmican and jam, and a few tins of potted meats. When they were about a mile and a half away their voices were quite audible to us at Ocean Camp, so still was the air.

We were, of course, very short of the farinaceous element in our diet. The flour would last ten weeks. After that our sledging rations would last us less than three months. Our meals had to consist mainly of seal and penguin; and though this was valuable as an anti-scorbutic, so much so that not a single case of scurvy occurred amongst the party, yet it was a badly adjusted diet, and we felt rather weak and enervated in consequence.

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Answer:

the two sentences are: “The apathy which seemed to take...” and “When they were about a mile...”

Explanation:

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Sometimes, when we undergo different situations, we tend to recount how the events affected us or state our opinions of some events. The two sentences in this excerpt from Ernest Shackleton's "South!" that show the author reflecting on memories of his experience, rather than recounting factual information are;

The apathy which seemed to take possession of some of the men at the frustration of their hopes was soon dispelled. When they were about a mile and a half away their voices were quite audible to us at Ocean Camp, so still was the air.

In these two sentences, instead of stating the actual events that transpired, the writer used words that convey his feelings and opinions.

For example, he noticed that some of the men had apathy that was soon dispelled. He also noticed that the air was still and the voices of the men were still audible at some distance.

So, these sentences show the author reflecting on his memories.

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Which of these words contain a suffix ? A.Summer B.flower Charvest D. tallest

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Answer:

D

Explanation:

the suffix of tallest is "est"

Answer:

Harvest

Explanation:

What a word suggests beyond its dictionary definition is its
A. connotation
B. association
C. interpretation
D. denotation
SUBMIT

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Answer:

A: connotation

Explanation:

Select all of the sentences that use a semicolon incorrectly.

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I think the second one and the third one are the only ones that you need to check

Please help ASAP!! please and thank you have a great and blessed day!

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1. 2.5 + 5.67

(2.5 is the same as 2.50)

Add digits in the same place value (2 + 5, 5 + 6. 0 + 7) to get 8.17

2. For each digit, just replace the digits between it and the decimal with 0 to find the value.

9: 90

8: 8

4: 0.4

8: 0.08

7: 0.007

3. hundreths: second digit to the right of the decimal

   in 98.487, it would be the second 8

What do you think is the most significant event that occurred in act two of othello?

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Answer:

Talk of love and war in Venice

Explanation:

Just as Montano says that the Turkish fleet of ships could not survive the ... Venice, Cassio witnessed that the Turks lost most of their fleet in the tempest. ... lazy in all matters except sex: “You rise to play and go to bed to work” (II.i.118). ... “With as little a web as this I will ensnare as great a fly as Cassio,” he asserts (II.i.169).

solve the riddle

what have legs but cant walk?​

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Answer:

An armchair.

It has legs but can't walk.

Answer:

An Armchair.

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1. Join the sentences together to write a defining or non-defining relative clause.

a. My sister decided to work in a different area. She was the best student in her course.

Anyone can help me?

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Answer:

My sister, who was the best student in her course, decided to work in a different area.

Explanation:

A relative clause is a clause or part of a sentence that helps define the 'who or what' in the sentence. A defining relative clause identifies the main noun or pronoun we are talking about. On the other hand, a non-defining relative clause provides additional information about the person or thing described.

In the given sentence, the subject is "my sister". By using the non-defining relative clause, we can join the two sentences by using a comma to separate the non-defining relative clause from the rest of the sentence.

Thus, the final sentence will be written as-

My sister, who was the best student in her course (non-defining relative clause), decided to work in a different area.

What do the following lines from Chapter IV of Gulliver's Travels mainly reveal about the Lilliputians?

For as to what we have heard you affirm, that there are other kingdoms and states in the world inhabited by human creatures as large as yourself, our philosophers are in much doubt, and would rather conjecture that you dropped from the moon, or one of the stars; because it is certain, that a hundred mortals of your bulk would in a short time destroy all the fruits and cattle of his majesty’s dominions: besides, our histories of six thousand moons make no mention of any other regions than the two great empires of Lilliput and Blefuscu.

Options:

A) They think that he would have an easier time and be better received by the Blefudcudians.


B) They refuse to believe that there are other “giants” like Gulliver because it would be overwhelming to think of what danger any more could pose.


C) They want to align themselves with Gulliver because they think that they will need him to combat other humans who may come to their land.


D) They do not trust Gulliver and believe that he may be plotting against them.

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Answer:they refuse to believe that their are other giants...

Explanation:it’s right

The following lines from Chapter IV of Gulliver's Travels mainly reveal this about the Lilliputians: B) They refuse to believe that there are other “giants” like Gulliver because it would be overwhelming to think of what danger any more could pose.

How to deduce meaning from a text

To deduce meaning from a text, it is vital to read carefully to ascertain the thoughts of the characters and speakers in the text.

In this line from the text, we see the belief that the Lilliputians hold about Gulliver. They feel that a hundred giants of his size will destroy all the fruits and cattle of his majesty.

So, they found it overwhelming to think of the dangers that could be posed by species like Gulliver.

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How do you know when evidence is taken from the text

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Answer:

when it is 1. plagarzied 2. it is quoted and cited corrected.

Explanation:

Answer:

Read and understand the question or claim.Closely read the text to find the answer.Note inferences and quotations from the passage that support the answer or claim.Analyze the evidence.Cite the evidence by including quotations of the excerpted text or by using these phrases:

Explanation:

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Explain why condition for microprogration must sterile​

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Answer:

Micropropagation is the practice of rapidly multiplying stock plant material to produce many progeny plants, using modern plant tissue culture methods

Explanation:

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part B which selection from the text best supports the answer to part

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Answer:

i dont know

Explanation:

i need to see it if u want me to answer

Which statement best summarizes the transcript?
A.Armstrong goes down the ladder, steps on the moon, and reports on the beauty he sees. The commander reads the plaque that is signed by the president of the United States.
B.Armstrong walks on the moon, telling the world "that's one small step for (a) man, one giant leap for mankind." His mission is one of peace for all mankind.
C.Armstrong radios the capsule commander that he is ready to start; TV coverage begins. Armstrong steps on the moon and reports on the dust and rocks, while the commander reads the plaque.
D.Armstrong explains what will happen to Aldrin; then both go down the ladder and walk together on the moon. It is a very exciting radio transcript of a great moment in history.

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Answer:

C. Armstrong radios the capsule commander that he is ready to start; TV coverage begins. Armstrong steps on the moon and reports on the dust and rocks, while the commander reads the plaque.

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I'd like the /a/some strawberries?
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There aren't some/any/the grapes in the shop.
An/A/The cheese sandwiches are £2.50

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Answer:

some

any

a

any

The

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