Any errors/suggestions? (Also Rate it please)

Any Errors/suggestions? (Also Rate It Please)

Answers

Answer 1

Answer:

i think its pretty good 10/10

Explanation:

however you refer to small children as it i think you should say they or them

Answer 2

Answer:you put a period before and. Don’t do that. Also go into more detail

Explanation:


Related Questions

Read the excerpt from Julius Caesar in Act IV.

Cassius: …I that denied thee gold will give my heart. Strike as thou didst at Caesar.

Brutus: (Suddenly melting, he says gently,) Sheathe your dagger. (He pushes the weapon back to Cassius.) Be angry when you will. Do what you will.

(He puts his hand to his head.) O Cassius, I am sick of many griefs. (He gives a great sigh.) Portia is dead.

Cassius: (Shocked) Portia? (With wonder) How escaped I killing when I crossed you so?

Brutus: (Bravely) Speak no more of her. (His servant Lucius brings in a tray with wine, two bowls, a book, and a lighted candle.) Give me a bowl of wine. (He and Cassius raise bowls and toast each other.) In this I bury all unkindness, Cassius.

Based on the excerpt, what effect does Portia's death have on Brutus?

Brutus is more concerned with with how Cassius treats him.

Brutus loses his temper more easily with Cassius.

Brutus realizes that arguing with Cassius is unimportant.

Brutus is no longer strong enough to stand up to Cassius.



pls answer

Answers

Correct Answer:

"Brutus realizes that arguing with Cassius is unimportant."

Explanation:

Answer:

The guy above me is correct give him the crown

Explanation:

PLEASEEEEEE HELPPP MEEEEE I DONT UNDERSTAND

Title of short story or novel is ungifted written by gordan korma
Describe the setting of your novel or short story. The setting Provide a quotation from the text to support your answer. Describe the protagonist of your novel or short story. Provide a quotation from the text to support your answer. Discuss the main conflict in your novel or short story. If the conflict is not perfectly clear yet, what do you suspect it will be? Which of the four major types of conflict best describes the situation you discussed? Describe the antagonist from your novel or short story. Provide a quotation from the text to support your answer. Describe an important piece of the backstory from your novel or short story. Provide a quotation from the text to support your answer. Describe an early development in the plot and explain why it is important. Provide a quotation from the text to support your answer.

Answers

Firstly it’s asking you to tell them the setting and back it up with text evidence, then to describe about the person trying to do good in the story and also provide text evidence, the main problem in the story, what do you think the conflict is , using conflicts like man vs world etc you provide what kind it is .....

Answer: about the novel or short story you read independently for this module. When providing quotes from your text, include page numbers in parentheses.Example:Describe the protagonist of your novel or short story.The protagonist of my novel is a tough, sixteen-year-old girl named Delaney who is struggling to raise her little sisters.Provide a quotation from the text to support your answer."Although she was just sixteen years old, Delaney had spent much of them providing for her sisters. She displayed the toughness - and weariness - of someone twice her age." (Page 16)Title of short story or novel: Build a FireAuthor: Jack London1. Describe the setting of your novel or short story. Provide a quotation from the text to support your answer.The setting of this story takes place in china.2. Describe the protagonist of your novel or short story. Provide a quotation from the text to support your answer.3. Discuss the main conflict in your novel or short story. If the conflict is not perfectly clear yet, what do you suspect it will be? Explain who is trying to do what.Which of the four major types of conflict best describes the situation you discussed? 4. Describe the antagonist from your novel or short story.Provide a quotation from the text to support your answer.5. Describe an important piece of the backstory from your novel or short story. Provide a quotation from the text to support your answer.6. Describe an early development in the plot and explain why it is important.Provide a quotation from the text to support your answerAnswer:

To Kill A Mockingbird.
Answer in your own words, teacher will run through G.oogle's plagiarism checker.
THX in advance.
Do not answer if you don't know the answer, pls!
AND NO LINKS!

Answers

Answer:from which country the answer is from

Explanation:

20 POINTS - GRADE 8 SPELLING SENTENCE MAKING

1. Create 5 sentences using 3 list words in one sentence. Bold the list words you have chosen.

2. Create 5 sentences using 2 list words in one sentence. Bold the list words you have chosen.

List words for 1 and 2:


forbidden
fortunate
friendship
furthermore
gasoline
glimpse
grief
guarantee
guidance
hardship
harmony
hasten
heir
hesitant
humane
hundredth
hydroelectric
ignore
illegible
illogical

Answers

Answer:

1:The forbidden gates of the houses opened very slowly.  2:I was very fortunate to find this money today. 3:My friendship is very special to me. 4:Furthermore into the tour we will see a very old truck ! 5:I can guarantee this is a fun project.     1:i was very hesitant to retake my test for the hundredth time. 2:furthermore into our friendship we became closer.  3:I ignored my friend while she talked about the field trip I was hesitant about going to. 4: As I took a glimpse at the picture i had a wave  of grief. 5: My mom said that I am forbidden to touch the gasoline pump

What do you want to learn? Life lessons (taxes, investments, money management), DIY stuff, etc.? Why do you want to know how or about this? Write a 7 sentence response.

Answers

Answer:

No topic mentioned, it depends on the topic you choose.

Explanation:

Start the answer off with

I want to learn ____ because ____

Going from there is easier. All you have to do is fluff the answer up with filler sentences and descriptive words. Describe why you would like to learn about your topic.

Here are some examples to start off with;

"I would like to learn to draw, because my aunt does it a lot."

or;

"I want to learn to program so I can start my own business."

Keep adding reasons why you'd like to do this, until you meet your requirement, and add filler and fluff to meet the long sentence requirement.

For example,

"I want to learn to program so I can start my own business. Programming makes it easier to make websites and advertising. I also generally find it pretty interesting and captivating."

We could've very easily added the last sentence into one of the previous. Just like this;

"On top of being cool, programming makes it easier to make websites and advertising online."

But despite being concise and clear, you may not meet your requirement or get full marks because of the lack of descriptive words.

Just by using adjectives and making longer sentences, you can easily complete questions like this as well as summaries, reflections, and other quiz questions that require 3 or more sentences with ease.

Look at that, you're already halfway done with the answer!

Which of the following uses repeating vowel sounds?

Windy, whooshing weather

If loneliness is a disease, love is the cure

The cold, soulless vacuum of space

Cool, blue, moonlit room

Answers

cool blue moonlit room
Answer- Cool, blue, moonlit room

Describe the main conflict in this book (hint: it’s not bullying)

and-What TYPE of conflict is present?

Answers

Answer:

whats the book

Explanation:

do u still need help ??? orrr

( Fantasy is the name of the poem ) Based on the title of this poem, predict what this poem will be about. What colors have meaning to you? What are the meanings?

Answers

Answer: Fantasy  world

Explanation:

the power or process of creating especially unrealistic or improbable mental images in response to psychological need an object of fantasy also  a mental image or a series of mental images (such as a daydream)

HOPE THIS HELPS :)

I predict the poem will be about a person’s aspirations or dreams. They could be talking about what their desired fantasy is, and how they wished their life plays out in the future no matter no unrealistic. The color lavender and sky blue have meaning to me, because sky blue is refreshing to the eyes and gives hope. Lavender is just a favorite :) hope this helps u

What are your opinions on the trial of Gabriel Fernandez?

Answers

This Trail was very sad and disturbing.. he deserved nothing that happened to him

Word Bank: lower, greater, higher

If the moon was closer to the Earth, the high tides would become _______________ and low tides would be _____________. This is because the force of gravity is _____________ when the distance between two objects is closer.

Answers

1: greater

2:lower

3:higher

Answer:

1. the high tides would become Higher

2. Low tides would become Lower

3. The force of gravity is Greater

Explanation:

Hope this helps have a wonderful day!

Please help I will mark brainliest I'm failing these class plz
( In the song Firework by Katy Perry identified all of the figurative languages list in the pic )
plz helpppp

Answers

when she says baby you’re a firework, that could be a metaphor. “do you ever feel like. plastic bag” is a simile. “do you ever feel, feel so paper thin” is a hyperbole. “like a lightning bolt, your heart will glow” is a simile. “even brighter than the moon, moon, moon boom boom boom” is alliteration, and the boom part could also be onomatopoeia. “you don’t have to feel like a waste of space” is a simile. “let your colors burst” and “as you’d shoot across the sky” could be idioms. “like the fourth of july” is allusion. “like a light night bolt” and “after a hurricane, comes a rainbow” could be imagery.

sorry it’s out of order

Turn this fragment into a complete sentence that includes detail from the text:
"back at cabin eleven"
Percy Jackson the Lightning Thief chapter 6 or 7 I think

Answers

Answer:

The campers were probably planning another prank back at cabin eleven, the Hermes cabin.

Explanation:

*This was not from the book, I just made a random sentence from what I already knew.*

Answer:

percy is going back to his caben i read the books in that serien its nice

Explanation:

.

Read the following claim: The Coronavirus outbreak will cause tremendous economic losses. Which sentence from the article provides the BEST support for the above statement? *
A. When organizers canceled the festival, it was only a matter of time before other major events also canceled.
B. School districts from Seattle, Washington, to Baltimore, Maryland, have closed schools.
C. However, that won't even be close to how much it will cost sports teams and amusement parks to close down.
D. It is expected to sicken nearly 50 million people in the United States this year and kill as many as 52,000 this flu season.

Answers

Answer:

Wow this was asked two years ago...

Explanation:

The oldest question I could find was from 2017

What is special about memoirs?

Answers

Answer:

While nonfiction, memoirs are unique in their level of subjectivity, given the nature of human memory and perception. ... Though they don't necessarily give a full, multi-perspective picture, memoirs are special in that they allow readers to see how others see and understand the same world.

Explanation:

Answer:

Everything

Explanation:

Which two details from the passage support the answer in Part A? A '"I haven't gone anywhere.''' (paragraph 5) B "I was free." (paragraph 5) C "The wind flicked my hair . . " (paragraph 5) D ". . . I like the way the water sprang up from the sprinkler after the pressure of my tires." (paragraph 5) E "You can run over my leg with your trike if you want." (paragraph 5) F "I folded my arms behind my head and watched a jay . ..." (paragraph 6)

Answers

Answer:

  Answer is D

Explanation:

like the way the water sprang up from the sprinkler after the pressure of my tires.

PLEASE I NEED HELP!!!!!!!!!
Explain how historical context affects readers’ understanding and appreciation of Anne franks diary of a young girl

Answers

Answer:

Anne Frank's diary has become famous throughout the world. The diary provides a vivid and poignant glimpse into the world of a young Jewish girl living in Nazi occupied Holland. Anne wrote diary while hiding from the Nazis in an Amsterdam warehouse. ... It was at this point that Anne's family decided to go into hiding.

Explanation:

“Oh the crackle of burnt wood to celebrate summer”

Answers

Answer:

You know that this is a way for people to just take the points right and yes it would be a onomatopoeia because it gives you the sound of the wood burning.

What are your opinions on the trial of Gabriel Fernandez?

Answers

Answer:

i dont like it

Explanation:

its weird and just chills me to the bone to know what happened to him through those times

QUESTION: Describe the geography of the location for the kid nation

Answers

Answer: I hope I understood the question right, but-

Explanation:

The show, featuring 40 children aged 8 to 15, was filmed on location at the Bonanza Creek Movie Ranch, a privately owned town built on the ruins of Bonanza City, New Mexico, 8 miles south of Santa Fe.

I need a little help on these two questions.



Second screenie is options for 13, third is options for 14. First is the questions

Answers

i dont know girly but hopefully i find the right answer

Reefs are warm habitats in the ocean.
Adjective:
Noun:


They occur in shallow water.
Adjective:
Noun:


The massive structure of a reef often contains coral.
Adjective:
Noun:


Coral is formed from tiny animals.
Adjective:
Noun:


When they die, the skeletons add to the stony structure.
Adjective:
Noun:


Reefs provide safe homes for animals.
Adjective:
Noun:


Colorful sea urchins live there.
Adjective:
Noun:

Answers

adj: warm
noun: reefs

adj: shallow
noun: water or they

(3-7 someone did the first two)

Adj: massive noun: structure

Adj:tiny noun: animals

Adj: stony noun: structure

Adj: safe noun: homes

Adj: colorful noun: sea urchins

The following question refers to the text Gus and Frieda: Geniuses at Recess. Read the paragraph and answer the question below it. The paragraphs have been labeled A, B, and C. The sentences in each paragraph have been numbered to help you identify them more easily.

Gus and Frieda: Geniuses at Recess

(A)
(1) Gus and Frieda were not enjoying recess. (2) They considered themselves athletically challenged. (3) To make things worse, the young geniuses' teacher asked them to play dodge ball.

What statement is true about paragraph A?

A. There is an error sentence number 1.
B. There is an error in sentence number 2.
C. There is an error in sentence number 3.
D. There are no errors in paragraph A.

Answers

Answer:

There is an error in sentence number three

Explanation:

Because the word that is geniuses is not supposed to have an apostrophe

Answer:

D. There are no errors in paragraph A

Explanation:

Select TWO purposes of the repetition of the phrase in the first and last stanzas?

a. creates unity throughout the poem
b. emphasizes an idea
c. adds to the alliteration.
d. shows the poet's lack of creativity
e. creates another metaphor

Answers

b and a hope this helps

Answer:

Emphasizes an idea & creates unity throughout the poem

Explanation:

Read the excerpt from Act IV of Julius Caesar.

Brutus: (Suddenly melting, he says gently,) Sheathe your dagger. (He pushes the weapon back to Cassius.) Be angry when you will. Do what you will.

(He puts his hand to his head.) O Cassius, I am sick of many griefs. (He gives a great sigh.) Portia is dead.

Cassius: (Shocked) Portia? (With wonder) How escaped I killing when I crossed you so?

Brutus: (Bravely) Speak no more of her. (His servant Lucius brings in a tray with wine, two bowls, a book, and a lighted candle.) Give me a bowl of wine. (He and Cassius raise bowls and toast each other.) In this I bury all unkindness, Cassius.

How does Portia's death in Julius Caesar affect Brutus?

It brings him courage to face the future.

It emphasizes for him how much he loved her.

It makes him unwilling to fight with Cassius.

It causes him to be unconcerned if he lives or dies.

Answers

Correct Answer:

"It makes him unwilling to fight with Cassius."

Explanation:

Answer:

it makes him unwilling to fight cassius .

Explanation:

Type the number of the spelling rule that applies to the word.

marriage

Answers

Answer:

Marry +age =marriage.

Explanation:

A final ‘y’ following a consonant changes to ‘i’ before a suffix except ‘ing’.

Answer:

I think its 4 correct me if im wrong

Explanation:

Help for the book Pay it Forward

Answers

I didn’t read the book but when I searched it up it said it’s said something about two boys watching football and eating popcorn at a girls house, sorry I hope it helps and gives you an idea!?
the answer to your question is C

What's the best ANTONYM (the word or phrase most nearly the same)
5. PROFUSE bleeding
a. steady b. excessive c. slight d. occasional e. necessary

Answers

Answer:

B. excessive

pls mark brainliest

Explanation:

b is the most similar word to profuse

it won't lemme do anything it says Don't use such phrases here, not cool! It hurts our feelings

Answers

Answer:

well then don’t say such phrases :/

Explanation:

This is for acedemics

Answer:

Ahh !just substitute "words that hurts our feelings" for abbreviations or use periods, commas etc.

Explanation:

~Hope this helps

Chose the letter of the sentence in which the word in bold-faced is used INCORRECTLY.

Answers

Its C the other answers dont fit the context
it would have to be C



In what ways are food allergies and food intolerance similar?
body
otein
A. Affected persons must see a doctor for medical treatment
B. Both have mild symptoms that are easily treated
food
fish
C. They both are caused by an immune system reaction.
D
They both involve the body's reaction to certain foods

Answers

The answer is D, when you are allergic to something your body and when you are intolerant to something your body also reacts for example being lactose intolerant
i would have to go with D
Other Questions
How would you ask for someone's signature? A. Su firma, por favor. B. Su profesin, por favor. C. Su nacionalidad, por favor. D. Su cdigo postal, por favor. In the 1960s, many people under the age of 21 were in the U.S. Army fighting in a war in Vietnam. However, several states didnot allow people to vote in elections until they reached age 21.How was this situation addressed?A)the Supreme Court ordered states to change their lawsB)the President signed a law requiring that all 18 year olds votec)an amendment to lower the voting age was added to the U.S. ConstitutionD)a new law was passed requiring members of the military be at least 21years of age What is the name of the process where rocks are being broken down into small grains of sediment or soil?A) WeatheringB) ErosionC) DepositionD) Uplifting Determine the slope of the line that is perpendicular to the line shown in the picture below.A. 3B. 1/3C. -3D. 1/3 Select TWO purposes of the repetition of the phrase in the first and last stanzas?a. creates unity throughout the poemb. emphasizes an ideac. adds to the alliteration.d. shows the poet's lack of creativitye. creates another metaphor 1. Hannah bought a package of 12 pens.She took of the pens to school. Howmany pens did Hannah take to school? Amare is building a rectangular fence. Originally, he plans to build an 18 ft by 14 ft fence but later decides to increase each dimension by x feet.Which equation represents the new perimeter of the fence?P = (18 + x ) + (14 + x ) P = (18 + 2x ) + (14 + 2x )P = 2(18 + x ) + 2(14 + x )P = 2(18 + 2x ) + 2(14 + 2x ) Your family is driving to the beach. You travel 200 kilometers in the first two hours. During the next hour, you stop for lunch and only travel 25 kilometers. What was tour average speed?A) 60 km/hB)75 km/hC)100km/hD)225 km/h please help now thank u PLSSS help ANYONE ????!!! a woman sold an article for 400.00and made a profit of 25%,Find ty cost price and profit If you live in Portland, you live in Oregon. Cara does not live in Oregon. Therefore, Cara does not live in Portland.a.) Overlapping Setsb.) Subsetsc.) Disjoint SetsPlease somebody help me Will looked everywhere for the book. Heavy Products, Inc. (HPI) developed standard costs for direct material and direct labor. In 2020, HPI estimated the following standard costs for one of their major products, the 10-gallon plastic container. Budgeted quantity Budgeted price Direct materials 0.1 pounds $90 per pound Direct labor 0.2 hours $30 per hour During June, Heavy Products produced and sold 21,000 containers using 2,400 pounds of direct materials at an average cost per pound of $93 and 2,100 direct manufacturing labor-hours at an average wage of $30.50 per hour. June's direct material flexible-budget variance is:_____.A) $18,720 favorable.B) $880,000 unfavorable.C) $100,000 favorable.D) $60,000 unfavorable. You are a lobbyist hired by a less developed country to try to prevent a developed country from increasing trade barriers against labor-intensive manufactured imports such as textiles. Make your case, arguing from both developed and developing country perspectives, in terms of who gains and who loses. 4b + 8c + 12 8b 2c + 6. HELP ASAPP! WILL GIVE MOST BRAINILIST The Earths surface is divided into __________ continents and __________ oceans.A.eight . . . threeB.seven . . . fourC.six . . . threeD.seven . . . two Which statement is true about this set of data? 43, 50, 60, 36, 47, 50, 52, 78 A. The range is 31. B. The mode is 78 C. The median is 51 D. The mean is 52. Find the values of the sine, cosine, and tangent for ZA.(TOP OF TRIANGLE IS (A))