A paragraph includes all of the following EXCEPT
1. Topic sentence that connects one claim with the thesis statement
2. supportive sentences with evidence to back up the claim
3. A strong concluding sentence
4. A concisely worded thesis statement
5. Appropriate transitional words or phrase to guide the reader along.

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Answer 1

Answer:

I think, 4 because a is a similar answer


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describe the taste and smell of blood in a paragraph for my narrative descriptive writing

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Answer:

Blood tastes like a little bit like metal but very weak, because of the iron in it.

Blood also smells like metal, but it can smell like nothing once dried.

Try adding maybe physical descriptions such as "the splatter of it coated my hands." or such

Explanation:

The answer to this question will depend on a few factors:

Which blood is being described.
Who is doing the describing.
How fancy you want to get.
So, if you’re talking regular ole human blood, that’s one thing, but alien blood could smell like anything. It might smell like butter or clams or books. You can make that up. Also, there are a few taboos with describing human blood that you wouldn’t have to worry about when describing animal blood, especially if the animal blood is somehow food, as in a rare steak or blood pudding.

If you really are just trying to describe human blood, however, I’m going to give you some words to use, but you’ll have to wait until the end of the post. I promise they’re there. Keep reading.

Who is doing the describing is also important. Vampires, for example, might describe the smell of blood much differently than a regular human. They might say it’s sweet-smelling or intoxicating or rotten (ew, gross, werewolves… or something). Since, at least for many vampires in fiction, blood is all they eat and their sense of smell is attuned to differences in blood, they’d have a much larger (and probably creepier) vocabulary for describing the smell.

However, vampires and other blood-guzzling monsters aren’t the only ones who might describe the scent of blood differently than normal people (nothing against any vampires who might be reading). There are smell and taste disorders that might cause a person to describe blood differently than others.

Dysosmia, for example, is “a neurological disorder that causes an altered sense of smell. The condition can manifest itself in a variety of ways: it may distort smells, which is a sub-condition called parosmia; initiate no olfactory response at all, called anosmia; or produce smells that aren’t there, called phantosmia.” (x)

Without a doubt, someone with Dysosmia is going to smell differently than you smell. For ideas, I’d find someone with Dysosmia and talk to them about their disorder. There are also a few links to learn more about this condition in the resources section below.

People with a fear of blood, known as Hemophobia, might describe blood differently. How their fear affects their descriptions is up to you, but attaching fear to a smell is bound to change a person’s descriptions of said smell.

Then there are cannibals: people who eat other people. To them, blood is a part of food, and food gets different boundaries on descriptors than human blood. Describing human blood as delicious or mouth-watering might get weird for the non-cannibals in the room. And, not to compare them to cannibals in any other respect, but this is also a problem for blood fetishists, people who derive sexual pleasure from blood. The sexualized descriptors they might use don’t fit neatly into society’s acceptable vocabulary for describing blood either.

Now that we’ve covered why a character might describe blood differently than others, let’s talk about how fancy you want to get.

It’s pretty common to hear blood described as metallic. That’ll be on the vocabulary list at the end of the post, for sure. But there are other ways to describe metallic smells, aren’t there, and ones that might help ground the description in setting or character. Let’s explore a few examples:

His blood smelled like my grandfather’s old change jar that he kept in the window of his study. The morning sun hit that jar and by lunchtime the whole room would smell like metal. It made me sick. I couldn’t even go in to borrow a pen unless the sun had been down for hours.
His blood smelled like a smithy, like raw iron and earth.
His blood smelled like the kitchen sink after Mother had cleaned the pots and pans with her metal scouring pad.
Metaphors might help you ground your descriptions more firmly into your story, but first you’ll need some basic springboard words. Here, finally, is a list of smells associated with fresh blood:

metallic
coppery
like iron
rusty
minerally
tinny
ruddy
like wet metal
like pennies
salty
musty
heady
The older wet blood is, the sweet it smells. Some people would even describe it as fruity, nutty, or ripe. Dry blood might smell mustier or more rancid than wet blood. Smell is also very closely tied to taste. Trying to get a handle on how you think blood tastes might help you describe its smell.

Keep in mind that human experience varies widely. Some people can’t smell blood at all, and others can smell a bottle cap’s worth of blood in a large room. Sensitivity to the smell of blood depends on the person.

Determining your point of view toward a topic helps you decide
O A. who your audience is.
O B. whether to write a topic or sentence outline.
O C. which aspects of the topic to discuss.
O D. the main idea of your essay.

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Answer:

C which aspects of the topic to discuss

Explanation:

Based on your own opinion toward a topic, you'll know exactly what you want to talk about.

what does marry say about john proctor?

A. he slept with her
B. he’s the devil’s man
C. he’s burned her with his finger nails
D. he’s Gods man

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The correct answer is B (she accuses him of witchcraft and calls him the devils man)

Which word or words best helps you understand the meaning of the word obedient?


The obedient child always followed her mother's requests. That night, she brushed her teeth, folded her clothes, and went to bed before her mother had to come in and remind her.


Question 5 options:


That night



Followed her mother's requests



Brushed her teeth



Folded her clothes

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“Followed her mother’s requests.”

This is the child being obedient to her mother. While the options “folded her clothes” and “brushed her teeth” are appealing, she could have done those things in her own as well. Following her mothers requests is blatant obedience since she is obeying what her mother requested of her. I hope this helped you! :D

im sick :( (irl lol)

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Answer:

oh im sry to hear

Explanation:

Write a short paragraph about 4 sentences about what you should do to improve your English

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Answer:I think that one way to improve my english might be to read more informational books. I think that reading those will help as they use a lot of descriptive words. Another way to do that might be to listen to audiobooks for pronunciation. Audiobooks let’s you listen to people who speak with fluent and correct pronunciation.

Explanation:

6. The factory in "Mexicans Begin Jogging" was under investigation for
A. Employing illegal immigrants
B. unsafe working conditions for employees
C. Manufacturing illegal parts and products
D. Forcing labor from undocumented immigrants

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The factory was under investigation for employing undocumented immigrants.

What happened in the "Mexicans Begin Jogging"?

According to the narrator and writer - Gary Soto in the free-verse poem captioned above, the immigration authorities swooped on the factory without notice to investigate workers who had entered the country illegally.

Soto's boss calls out to him but he responds by saying he is an American Citizen - a lie that both he and his boss is well aware of.

His boss tells him that there is no time to lie, presses some money onto his hands, and advises him to run.

The correct answer, therefore, is A.

See more about this poem in the link below:

https://brainly.com/question/843627

Can someone plz help me? :(

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Answer:

2.

Explanation:

hope it helps

Jefferson believes it is the (blank) of a people to overthrow their government when their natural rights have been denied them. Select all that apply.
-downfall
-right
-folly
-duty​

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Duty and right. . . . . .

Which is the closest antonym for the word survive, as it is
used in the article?
A. overcome
B. determine
C. perish
D. challenge

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Answer: I think it would be perish?

Explanation:

Have your parents, grandparents, other older family members or teachers introduced you to music that they loved when they were younger? If so, what artists or musical styles have you “inherited” from them?

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Answer:

yes

Explanation:

my family loved artists like Luther vandross, the O'Jays, Whitney Houston, Lisa Fisher, along with a bunch of others.

Is it important for teenagers to be informed about sports, political, cultural, and social events happening in your country and worldwide? What do news programs need to have to get adolescents attention?


(please the answer must be in a type of essay or at least 5 lines)

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Answer:

It is important for teenagers to be informed about local, regional, and global events happening in their country. They should be aware of the problems occurring in different countries around the globe. It helps them to understand how these events are interconnected with each other.

For example, in the US, teenagers might read about the presidential election or the latest in entertainment. They may also want to know what is happening in their country’s neighboring countries like Mexico.

It is important for teenagers to be informed about these significant events in order to have a better understanding of how their country is being shaped.

When teenagers are exposed to the events in their country, they are able to take more control over their lives. They can make decisions that will positively affect themselves and not just blindly follow the decisions made by the government.

We should be providing the knowledge and skills to our teenagers, so that they can become informed citizens, aware of what is going on in the world.

It is important for teenagers to be knowledgeable about sports, political, cultural and social events happening in their country.

Teenagers today are growing up in a world full of misinformation. They are being targeted by clickbait journalism and sensationalized news headlines. We should instead provide them with information that is accurate and unbiased so that they can become informed citizens of tomorrow.

Explanation:

hope this helps! goodluck and enjoy the rest of your day /or night.

What town is colonel sherburn from in huck Finn

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Answer:

Colonel Sherburn is a denizen of "a little one-horse town in a big bend" in Arkansas who appears in chapters 21 and 22 of Adventures of Huckleberry Finn.

Explanation:

According to the internet it's Arkansas

Jack is a page (a knight's helper) in Camelot. His story involves jousting matches and boisterous feasts. Although Jack is small for his age, he hopes to become a knight someday, like his tough older cousin. While working in the horse stalls one day, Jack overhears a plot against the king. He collects evidence and presents it to his cousin, who delivers the news to the king. The plot is thwarted and Jack is hailed as a hero.
In part of the story, some other children tease Jack, saying he'll never amount to anything because he is so short. Which statement best explains how this plot event develops the theme that being smart and resourceful is more important than being big and strong?

A.
It shows that being observant of our surroundings can lead to surprising rewards.

B.
It shows that children can be cruel and need to be taught not to act as bullies.

C.
It shows that inner strength is not always recognized by those around us.

D.
It shows that short people are treated unfairly and should be given more power.

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Answer:

Is C i just do the same quiz and i got it right, hope it helps:)!

(They / call) …… ……….…. me in 5 minutes?

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Answer:

Your answer :Call me in 5 minutes .

Answer:

answer is "me "because "they" does not make any sense.

Call me in 5 minutes.

Explanation:

Have a great day!

TYV IT WAS RIGHT THEN THERE

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huh  just wanted the points

hardest word to write and spell​

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Answer: SuperCalifragilisticexpialidocious

Explanation: not many people can spell this word

what does Aphorism mean

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Answer:

something that contains a general truth

Explanation:

Which statement best describes the passage?
1. Warren explains the students’ position, then describes how it has been previously handled by the courts.
2.Warren provides reasons why segregation is permissible, then offers evidence to support the reasons.
3. Warren claims that the students don’t have grounds to sue, then gives reasons why not.
4. Warren gives a history of segregation in America, then explains how the students fit into that history.

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Answer:

Warren explains the students' position, then describes how it has been previously handled by the courts. Warren provides reasons why

Warren explains the students' position, then describes how it has been previously handled by the courts.

Explanation:

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High schools should require all students to take four years of math. Even though most students will probably not become mathematicians, many of them will choose a profession where math plays an important role. Architects, pharmacists, and carpenters all use math every day. A strong math foundation in high school is important for students to succeed in these and in other professions.

In 1–2 sentences, explain which word or phrase should be added to the paragraph to increase its cohesion and why that word or phrase would increase cohesion.

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Answer:

The words or phrase that should be added to the paragraph to increase its cohesion are:

The compulsory study of mathematics for high school students for four years will enable the students have a higher intellectual and thinking capacity.

This is because, solving mathematics requires a high rate of thinking fast. This helps the students build a high thinking faculty.

Therefore, it is very important for everyone to study mathematics in highschool irrespective of the profession they choose in order to increase their intellectual capacity.

Hope this helps!

Explanation:

Give the other person brainliest ;)

can someone please help me with this,im going to brainlist u if u answered it correctlythe question is in the pic and the poem is in here

The Unfolding Bud

one is amazed
by a water-lily bud,
Unfolding
with each passing day
taking on a rich color
and new dimensions.

one is not amazed,
at a first glance ,
by a poem ,
which is as tight-closed
as a tiny body .

yet , one is surprised
to see the poem
gradually unfolding .
revealing its rich inner self ,
as one reads it
again
and over again . ​

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Answer:

1. You can compare a human being to a tight-closed tiny bud as like how humans don't open up easily and some people aren't impressed with them at first glance. But as time goes on, and they get to know them, they slowly open up.

2. Whenever you meet new friends, some of them don't easily see the beauty or goodness inside you because sometimes you don't open up easily or they can't/don't know how to tell that easily. As time passes, you slowly open up to them and they get to learn who you really it. (This question really depends on who you are. If you are a quick to trust person, you're probably the first part of the question and you should say, "My friends can easily see who I am as a person, because it is a part of my personality. I put my heart out and they see my 'beauty.'" If that fits you! If not, choose the first part I put and edit the you to I.)

3. In my opinion, I think it's better to reserve your goodness and let people discover it as time goes on and they get to know you instead of revealing it right away so they can't take advantage of you.

1) What is the BEST way to summarize paragraph 2?

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what is paragraph 2 show me the paragraph and it will help u

Help!!! can someone who is on flvs pls help i have 6 missing assignments

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Answer: I’ll try to help but im catching up on math because i was sick!

Explanation:


The mother put her children to bed, and then she took a shower and put on her pajamas. She yawned several times while setting her alarm clock.

Based on the context clues, how do you think the character feels?

tired

happy

upset

nervous

7 of 20

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Answer:

A. Tired

Explanation:

We can infer that in the story it’s around nighttime, as the mother is putting her children to bed, yawning, and setting her alarm clock for the morning. The fore, we can assume that she is tired and about to go to bed.

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how to use sympathize in a sentence ?

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Answer:

I sympathize with you

Explanation:

it's a verb.

I sympathize, you sympathize, we sympathize, they sympathize

We also sympathize deeply with the families of all victims of war.
You use it when you feel sorry for someone

Which excerpt from A Man's World contains a stage direction?
A. FRITZ—You are tired to-night, Yah? Un?
B. FRANK—Now—now—Fritzie—if you get fidgety—
C. FRITZ—(Sitting at L. of desk.) No—but you—
D. FRANK—Kiddie will be the end of everything for me.

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Answer C -_-

Explanation:

research five examples of entertainment speeches in social media and the internet.

what aspects of the speeches made it an entertainment speech?

and explain why it is an entertainment speech.

will mark brainlist if answer​

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Answer:

sports, music, movie , quiz ,

Explanation:

because it help others to be enterained

Which statements best describe how both passages portray the character of Marshall? Both passages emphasize Marshall's change in behavior since the robbery. Both passages provide a reason for Marshall's decision to quit the baseball team. Both passages describe the effect of the robbery on Marshall's relationship with his parents. Both passages show how Marshall feels about Coach Bronson. Both passages reveal that Marshall feels relieved when his friends demonstrate concern for him.

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The statements that describe how the passages portray the character of Marshall include:

Both passages emphasize Marshall's change in behavior since the robbery.Both passages provide a reason for Marshall's decision to quit the baseball team.

It should be noted that a character simply means the individual or another being that the narrative in a story is about. Characters guide the readers as they help readers understand the plots in the story.

From the complete question, the passages emphasized Marshall's change in behavior since the robbery and gave a reason for Marshall's decision to quit the baseball team.

Learn more about characters on:

https://brainly.com/question/25885135

please complete it please help me .​

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Anuj, why are you wearing a bandage. Can I do anything for you?

No thanks, I can manage. A street dog bit me.

You should be careful. You must get injections after a dog bite

You should have told me in the morning. My father would have dropped us to school in his car.

I should have told you, but my uncle said he would drop me.

Anuj, you should take care. You will not attend the physical training.

Thanks Ma'am, I would not have missed it if I could stand properly.

You ought to follow your doctor's advice. You must bring medical certificate too.

I surely will do that.

When will the doctor remove this bandage?

He shall take it off next week.

Supply the correct form of words.
15. It is not to play scissors, knives and small round objects. (safely)
16. Little Star is a teacher. (humor)
17. My classmate sang English songs last night. (beautiful)
18. You must put all the in a cupboard. (chemistry)
19.A fairy changed Little Pea's rags into beautiful clothes. (magic)
20.His of some words is not correct. (pronounce)
please help me, i'm in a hurry, thank you ​

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Answer:

English is my 3 third language,so I'm really sorry if my answers are not correct.

It is not save...

My classmate sang beautiful..

You must put all the chemistry...

A fairy changed Little Pea' s magic rags...

His pronounce...

I hope my answers are correct.

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