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We have been using gps systems for years now, but do you know the risks that come with having one in almost all of your devices? Well if you don’t, just know that it's not 100% risk, they can help you too. Are all of the rewards worth it? It is time to find out.

Its common knowledge that GPS can find and use your location for many things such as finding your destination, speed, ect. Ect. But do you know how they do it? GPS systems use multiple satellites to track your location to make many things easy for you like we mentioned previously. “A GPS tracking system uses the Global Navigation Satellite System (GNSS) network. This network incorporates a range of satellites that use microwave signals that are transmitted to GPS devices to give information on location” Knowing all of this can help you figure out where your phone is if you lost it.

If you are ever in danger and call the police, they can use your GPS to find your location if you are ever unable to locate where you are. This can save many lives. GPS is also important to “figure out where you are needing to go” when it comes to vehicular travel. Many cars nowadays even have screens in them so you can connect your phones GPS to it, further highlighting the importance of the GPS.

However with the GPS, its not all sunshine and rainbows. Yes it can help you get out of an emergency, but it can be the thing that causes it in the first place. GPS is something that could be taken easily from someone who knows what they are doing, making you vulnerable to cyber attacks. If someone knows this information, they can figure out so much about you. So GPS can be dangerous to have.

In conclusion, GPS systems can be very helpful to the point where you feel like you need them, and even if you do not, there are many amounts of benefits to using them, from knowing where you are to being able to find lost items across the planet. yet there are still some risks when using them. Everything uses gps now and it is astonishing how little people truly know about them when they should. At least accounting for the huge amount it is used in anyone's day to day life. Don't you think this should be common knowledge?

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Answer 1

Answer: This looks very well, just makes sure there are all upper-case letters after a period, and good grammar, but I looked over it and I see greatness.

Explanation:

Answer 2

Answer:

We have been using gps systems for years now, but do you know the risks that come with having one in almost all of your devices? Well if you don’t, just know that it's not 100% risk, they can help you too. Are all of the rewards worth it? It is time to find out.

Its common knowledge that GPS can find and use your location for many things such as finding your destination, speed, ect. Ect. But do you know how they do it? GPS systems use multiple satellites to track your location to make many things easy for you like we mentioned previously. “A GPS tracking system uses the Global Navigation Satellite System (GNSS) network. This network incorporates a range of satellites that use microwave signals that are transmitted to GPS devices to give information on location” Knowing all of this can help you figure out where your phone is if you lost it.

If you are ever in danger and call the police, they can use your GPS to find your location if you are ever unable to locate where you are. This can save many lives (i would say, this could save your life sense you where just talking in the 2nd person). GPS is also important to “figure out where you are needing to go” when it comes to vehicular travel. Many cars nowadays even have screens in them so you can connect your phones (an apostrophe is needed in phones) GPS to it, further highlighting the importance of the GPS.

However with the GPS, its not all sunshine and rainbows. Yes it can help you get out of an emergency, but it can be the thing that causes it in the first place. GPS is something that could be taken easily from someone who knows what they are doing, making you vulnerable to cyber attacks. If someone knows this information, they can figure out so much about you. So GPS can be dangerous to have.  

In conclusion, GPS systems can be very helpful to the point where you feel like you need them, and even if you do not, there are many amounts of benefits to using them, from knowing where you are to being able to find lost items across the planet. yet there are still some risks when using them. Everything uses gps now and it is astonishing how little people truly know about them when they should. At least accounting for the huge amount it is used in anyone's day to day life. Don't you think this should be common knowledge?


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Answer:

Pride or Confidence

Explanation:

Which of the following are fuels that can be burned to create heat?
all of the above
wood
natural gas
charcoal

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Answer:

All of the above. Wood, Natural gas, and charcoal can all be burned go make heat.

Answer:

All of the above!

Explanation:

The above text is an example of what type of text?

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Sorry but what text above is the question asking about. Does this come with a text or did you forget to include it?
Need the text above to answers

How does Samuel try to befriend Richard

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Answer:

by letting him down gently

Explanation:

Which poems Uses both lambic pentameter and blank verse

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Answer:

Explanation:

Blank Verse Form poem uses both iambic pentameter and blank verse.

Help please is for today

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Answer:

4. That you can't change what you look like. So love yourself the way you are.

Answer and Explanation:

3. There will always be something better than what you have, and those things will always be out of your reach. The grass being greener on the other side of the fence represents those items that people want that is better than what they have, but they can't get the item.

4. You can't what you look like or where you came from. It is implying that although you can't change these physical factors, there are other ways to change and make you stand out. Its saying to be proud of what you look like and where you are from, and its not just those features that makes you yourself.

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McCandless thinks that information design is really important because “we’re all visualizers now; we’re all demanding a visual aspect to our information.” If we assume it’s true, then how has this changed our educational system? Are there particularly good examples of how teachers and schools have responded? Extreme deficits?

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Because it is so important

Explanation:

how pitch and wavelength related to each other

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The shorter the wavelength, the higher the pitch.

What is a good character trait for Parvana at the end of the movie? Why? HELP PLEASE HURRY

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Answer:

Shes respectuful and careful about her family because she respects and loves her family dearly we can tell.

Explanation:

Parvana's character is seen as: courageous, strong, independent and caring. She is very loyal to her family and friends, and she respects and loves her family dearly. There is a bit of childhood innocence evident by Parvana, as she is oblivious at times to the things going on around her.

Which sentence best shows a strong thesis statement?

O The story shows what life was like in the Middle Ages.

O The main idea of the story is inspirational to the reader.

© The story shows that small acts of kindness can have a positive impact on a community.

© The main character is a teenager who loves to play soccer and spend time with her family.​

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Answer:

what's the story.......

Answer: its not D

Explanation:

i just took it

6. As used in line 4, "distinction” most
nearly means
A) difference.
B) feature.
C) clarity.
D) prestige.

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answer A !
explanation: a difference or contrast between similar things or people.

How mainly does the author illustrate the rise of the "Extrovert Ideal"?


A. By comparing the rise of the "Extrovert Ideal" to "opening a Pandora’s Box of personal anxieties."


B. By comparing the rise of the "Extrovert Ideal" to the way we raise our children.


C. By contrasting the rise of the "Extrovert Ideal" with the Culture of Personality.


D. By drawing a parallel between the rise of the "Extrovert Ideal" to the life of Dale Carnegie.

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Answer: D. By drawing a parallel between the rise of the "Extrovert Ideal" to the life of Dale Carnegie.

Explanation:

In "Quiet: The Power of Introverts in a World That Can’t Stop Talking" (2012), Susan Cain illustrates the rise of the "Extrovert Ideal" by comparing it to the life of Dale Carnegie, as described in his How to Win Friends and Influence People (1936).

According to Cain, Carnegie´s change from a farm boy to a sales man and then to a public speaking icon, is a good example of the move from a Culture of Character, prevalent until the 1920s, to a Culture of Personality, which is externally focussed as it gives more importance to appearances than to actions.

Carmen is planning rail lines for a new train station.

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Answer:

umm ;-; Ok any other information?? ur question is very incomplete...

Explanation:

Answer:

m<1 =163 degrees

163,17,163,17 (all in degrees)

163,17,163,17  (all in degrees)

Explanation:

I have duplicated and joined a chart (in figure 1) of the issue.  

For simplicity of comprehension, I have connected a second outline which is named.  

On line a  

17+<CBE=180 (Linear Pair Postulate)  

m<2=<CBE=180-17=163 degrees  

<ABG=<CBE=163 degrees (Vertically Opposite Angles)  

<ABE=<GBC= 17 degrees(Vertically Opposite Angles)  

On line b  

m<1=<DEB=<ABG=163 degrees (Corresponding Angles)  

<BEF=<GBC= 17 degrees (Corresponding Angles)  

<HEF=<DEB=163 degrees (Vertically Opposite Angles)  

<DEH=<BEF=17 degrees (Vertically Opposite Angles)  

Accordingly:  

m<1 =163 degrees  

Clockwise from upper left, the points shaped with line an are: 163 degrees, 17 degrees, m<2=163 degrees and 17 degrees.  

Clockwise from upper left, the points shaped with line b are: m<1=163 degrees, 17 degrees, 163 degrees, and 17 degrees.

What details does Shakespeare borrow from Rosalynde in this excerpt from As You Like It? How does Shakespeare transform elements of Rosalynde in the opening of his comedy? Use evidence from the text to support your response. Your response should be one or two complete paragraphs.

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Answer:

Both of the stories are about brothers that one of them take advantage of the other ones and they all fight. Shakespeare’s is a little more light hearted then the other one and there are many different aspects to it that make Shakespeare’s light hearted like how they are constantly calling each other names.

Explanation:

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The details that Shakespeare borrows from Rosalynde in this excerpt are the fact that the brothers take advantage of each other.

What is a Text Detail?

This has to do with the contents of a text that are used to develop and advance a plot in a given text.

Hence, we can see that Shakespeare borrowed some details from Rosalynde as he talks about two dissenting brothers but tells his story in a light-hearted tone.

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Is there a prompt, requirements, or instructions? If so I can help

Tell me one unique fact about yourself.

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Answer:

I have natural red hair

Explanation:

only 2% of the world has red hair

Answer:

1. I rather see others happy then myself

2. My personality changes mattering who im  talking to  

Before clocks were invented, people told time by the sun.

a
Independent Clause
Dependent Clause
b

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The answer to the question is a

Answer: It is A

Explanation:

because it's doing it on its own

They used to be a tree to tell the time, and it used to follow the sun.

(Tree Stump) That they used to use.

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Why? What is he implying?
(Romeo and Juliet)

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He is also implying sadness. In the book they ate sad when they can’t see each other in secret.

Can someone help me?

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I believe the answer B is correct.

How does Paul define agape and how is it different from eros?

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Answer:Other ancient authors have used forms of the word to denote love of a spouse or family, or affection for a particular activity, in contrast to eros (an affection of a sexual nature). Within Christianity, agape is considered to be the love originating from God or Christ for humankind.

Explanation:

Which sentence in the passage above has an error

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where's the passage?

is it invisible

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watches

inches

lunches

dishes

brushes

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I went to my doctor today he said I was 5ft 1 inches, as I was going in the room for a check up I saw all their lunches and Dirty dishes and a nurse with a lot of watches on her hand.

How would you respond if you had to go 1 year without any technology? What would you do to occupy your time? 5 or more sentences help please

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Answer:

If i had to go one year without technology

I'll resort to the old games i could even swim sometimes go see friends i will read novels or short story books if there was technology i would spend my time learning crafts and new activities or i could join various club to keep myself busy.

This is just me

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Answer:

I am pretty positive its the last one, "How computer viruses can be prevented"

Explanation:

Computer Viruses are the problem, and how they can be prevented is the solution

Answer:

I feel like "How computer viruses can be prevented" is correct.

Explanation:

Computer viruses are a problem, and prevention is a solution

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If slowing down is not a possibility then the logical thing to do would be to hit the man. While his life may be lost my friends and my own will most likely be saved. Also if another car were to come along after I drove off the cliff the man or the person driving the car would still most likely die since I couldn’t avoid it they wouldn’t be able to either.

How does having eyes in front help predators hunt their prey?

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Answer:

The location of the eyes on a skull determines how much an animal can see around them. Predators often have eyes located in the front of their skull. Eyes facing front give predators the ability to focus on and target their prey.

Explanation:

Based on the article, which of the following is
TRUE?
А
Earth Day was founded in America in the
1950s.
B
The goal of Earth Day is to raise money
for the environment.
C
Senator Gaylord Nelson wanted people
to know the planet was in danger.
D
Today, about 1 million people celebrate
Earth Day around the world,

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Answer: C

Explanation:

Globally, how have our lives and habits changed that may have contributed to the global epidemic?

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People would refuse to wear mask and stay inside just for a week or two. Other country’s have done this and it has helped, there isn’t many with it there.

4. How can a document's organization help us better understand the document's purpose?

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so you know what it’s for, labels sweetie

6. PART B: Which paragraph from the text best
supports the answer to PART A?
A Paragraph 12
B Paragraph 16
C Paragraph 31
D Paragraph 34
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Answer:

C

Explanation:

Answer:

c

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